英语写作常见的错误与分析（二）
<p>五。指代不清(<span word="Ambiguous">Ambiguous</span> <span word="Reference">Reference</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Pronouns">Pronouns</span>)</p><p>指代不清主要讲的是代词与被指代的人或物关系不清，或者先后所用的代词不一致。</p><p>病句1：<span word="Mary">Mary</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="friendly">friendly</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="sister">sister</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="she">she</span> <span word="wanted">wanted</span> <span word="her">her</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="her">her</span> <span word="bridesmaid">bridesmaid</span>.</p><p>(玛丽和我姐姐很要好，因为她要她做她的伴娘。)</p><p>剖析：读完上面这一句话，读者无法明确地判断两位姑娘中谁将结婚，谁将当伴娘。如果我们把易于引起误解的代词的所指对象加以明确，意思就一目了然了。</p><p>改为：<span word="Mary">Mary</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="friendly">friendly</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="sister">sister</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="she">she</span> <span word="wanted">wanted</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="sister">sister</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="her">her</span> <span word="bridesmaid">bridesmaid</span>.</p><p>病句2：<span word="And">And</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="know">know</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="society">society</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="serving">serving</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="yourself">yourself</span>.</p><p>剖析：句中人称代词<span word="we">we</span> 和反身代词<span word="yourself">yourself</span>指代不一致。</p><p>改为：<span word="We">We</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="know">know</span> <span word="society">society</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="serving">serving</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="ourselves">ourselves</span>.</p><p>六。不间断句子(<span word="Run">Run</span>-<span word="on">on</span> <span word="Sentences">Sentences</span>)</p><p>什么叫<span word="run">run</span>-<span word="on">on</span> <span word="sentence">sentence</span>?请看下面的例句：</p><p><span word="There">There</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="ways">ways</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="get">get</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="know">know</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="outside">outside</span> <span word="world">world</span>.</p><p>剖析：这个句子包含了两层完整的意思：<span word="There">There</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="ways">ways</span>.以及<span word="We">We</span> <span word="get">get</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="know">know</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="outside">outside</span> <span word="world">world</span>.。简单地把它们连在一起就不妥当了。</p><p>改为：</p><p><span word="There">There</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="ways">ways</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="learn">learn</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="outside">outside</span> <span word="world">world</span>.</p><p>或：</p>
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