英语写作常见的错误与分析（一）
<p>下面我们对一些在英语写作中典型的病句实例逐一加以剖析。</p><p>一。不一致(<span word="Disagreements">Disagreements</span>)</p><p>所谓不一致不光指主谓不一致，它还包括了数的不一致、时态不一致及代词不一致等。</p><p>病句：<span word="When">When</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="money">money</span>, <span word="he">he</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="want">want</span> <span word="to">to</span>.</p><p>(人一旦有了钱，他就能想干什么就干什么。)</p><p>剖析：<span word="one">one</span>是单数第三人称，因而本句的<span word="have">have</span>应改为<span word="has">has</span>;同理，<span word="want">want</span>应改为<span word="wants">wants</span>。本句是典型的主谓不一致。</p><p>改为：<span word="Once">Once</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="money">money</span>, <span word="he">he</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="wants">wants</span> (<span word="to">to</span> <span word="do">do</span>).</p><p>二。句子不完整(<span word="Sentence">Sentence</span> <span word="Fragments">Fragments</span>)</p><p>在口语中，交际双方可借助手势、语气、上下文等理解不完整的句子。可是书面语就不同了，句子结构不完整会令意思表达不清，这种情况常常发生在主句写完以后，笔者又想加些补充说明时发生。</p><p>病句：<span word="There">There</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="ways">ways</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="know">know</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="society">society</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="example">example</span>, <span word="by">by</span> <span word="TV">TV</span>, <span word="radio">radio</span>, <span word="newspaper">newspaper</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="on">on</span>.</p><p>剖析：本句后半部分<span word="For">For</span> <span word="example">example</span>, <span word="by">by</span> <span word="TV">TV</span>, <span word="radio">radio</span>, <span word="newspaper">newspaper</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="on">on</span>.不是一个完整的句子，仅为一些词语，不能独立成句。</p><p>改为：<span word="There">There</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="ways">ways</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="know">know</span> <span word="society">society</span>, <span word="for">for</span> <span word="example">example</span>, <span word="by">by</span> <span word="TV">TV</span>, <span word="radio">radio</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="newspaper">newspaper</span>.</p><p>三。悬垂修饰语(<span word="Dangling">Dangling</span> <span word="Modifiers">Modifiers</span>)</p><p>所谓悬垂修饰语是指句首的短语与后面句子的逻辑关系混乱不清。</p>
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