11月10日雅思写作的范文及语料库解析
<p> 三段：国家培养专业运动的弊端 + 普及民众体育设施的利好：</p><p> <span word="Granted">Granted</span>, <span word="there">there</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="garden">garden</span> <span word="without">without</span> <span word="weeds">weeds</span>. <span word="Excessive">Excessive</span> <span word="investment">investment</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="training">training</span> <span word="professional">professional</span> <span word="sportsmen">sportsmen</span> <span word="might">might</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="money">money</span> <span word="fly">fly</span>, <span word="after">after</span> <span word="all">all</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="pressing">pressing</span> <span word="social">social</span> <span word="problems">problems</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="need">need</span> <span word="support">support</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="public">public</span> <span word="purse">purse</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="popularizing">popularizing</span> <span word="free">free</span> <span word="education">education</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="ameliorating">ameliorating</span> <span word="medical">medical</span> <span word="care">care</span>. <span word="An">An</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="might">might</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="hold">hold</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="provide">provide</span> <span word="common">common</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="sports">sports</span> <span word="facilities">facilities</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="create">create</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="possibilities">possibilities</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="enhancing">enhancing</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="heath">heath</span> <span word="index">index</span> <span word="amongst">amongst</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="general">general</span> <span word="public">public</span>. <span word="By">By</span> <span word="contrast">contrast</span>, <span word="professional">professional</span> <span word="sports">sports</span> <span word="facilities">facilities</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="serve">serve</span> <span word="small">small</span> <span word="group">group</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="people">people</span>.</p><p> 翻译：的确，没有不长杂草的花园，，在培养运动员方面过度投资等于浪费金钱。毕竟，我们有更加紧迫的民生问题需要来自国库的财政支持例如教育和医疗。同时，很多人也会认为，普及推广民众体育设施可以为更多普通人的健身提供良好的契机，相反，运动员使用的专业体育设施只有少数人才能使用。</p><p> 新东方薛鹏原创语料库总结：</p><p> 1. <span word="might">might</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="money">money</span> <span word="fly">fly</span> <span word="v">v</span> 等于浪费金钱</p><p> 2. <span word="financial">financial</span> <span word="support">support</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="public">public</span> <span word="purse">purse</span> 来自国家的财政支持</p><p> 3. <span word="popularize">popularize</span> <span word="free">free</span> <span word="education">education</span> <span word="v">v</span>普及免费教育</p><p> 4. <span word="ameliorate">ameliorate</span> <span word="medical">medical</span> <span word="care">care</span> <span word="v">v</span> 改善医疗</p><p> 5. <span word="create">create</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="possibilities">possibilities</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="doing">doing</span> <span word="sth">sth</span> <span word="v">v</span> 创造更多的 的可能性;</p>
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