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<p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="student">student</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="want">want</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="visit">visit</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="military">military</span> <span word="exhibtion">exhibtion</span>(拼写错误)<span word="with">with</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="classmate">classmate</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="see">see</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="possible">possible</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="provide">provide</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="information">information</span> <span word="regarding">regarding</span> <span word="exhibition">exhibition</span>.</p><p> <span word="Firstly">Firstly</span>, <span word="where">where</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="exhibitions">exhibitions</span> <span word="place">place</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="city">city</span>, (加连词<span word="and">and</span>)<span word="which">which</span> <span word="bus">bus</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="get">get</span> <span word="there">there</span>? <span word="Secondly">Secondly</span>, <span word="please">please</span> <span word="tell">tell</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="dates">dates</span>(单复数保持一致，建议把<span word="a">a</span>改成<span word="the">the</span>) <span word="of">of</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="opening">opening</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="closing">closing</span>?<span word="Thirdly">Thirdly</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="inquire">inquire</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="any">any</span> <span word="discounts">discounts</span> <span word="available">available</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="entrance">entrance</span> <span word="tickets">tickets</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="student">student</span>?</p><p> <span word="Your">Your</span> <span word="attention">attention</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="letter">letter</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="highly">highly</span> <span word="appreciated">appreciated</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="looking">looking</span> <span word="forward">forward</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="hearing">hearing</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="you">you</span>.</p><p> </p>
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