考研英语作文范文批改(185)
<p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="graduate">graduate</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="ever">ever</span> <span word="lived">lived</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="dormitory">dormitory</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="studied">studied</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="Canada">Canada</span>. <span word="Now">Now</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="came">came</span>(<span word="come">come</span>的过去分词是<span word="come">come</span>) <span word="back">back</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="hometown">hometown</span>. <span word="As">As</span>(去掉，否则这句话有语法问题) <span word="I">I</span> <span word="went">went</span> <span word="away">away</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="hastily">hastily</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="forgot">forgot</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="return">return</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="CD">CD</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="lended">lended</span>(<span word="lend">lend</span>的过去式是<span word="lent">lent</span>) <span word="it">it</span>(去掉，前边有<span word="which">which</span>) <span word="to">to</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="several">several</span> <span word="weeks">weeks</span> <span word="ago">ago</span>.</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="indeed">indeed</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="sorry">sorry</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="did">did</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="believe">believe</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="intention">intention</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="that">that</span>. <span word="To">To</span> <span word="remedy">remedy</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="mistake">mistake</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="provide">provide</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="ways">ways</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="solving">solving</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="problem">problem</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="choose">choose</span>.</p><p> <span word="One">One</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="delivery">delivery</span>(应该用动词<span word="deliver">deliver</span>) <span word="it">it</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="EMS">EMS</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="soon">soon</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="possible">possible</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="busy">busy</span> <span word="listening">listening</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="recently">recently</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="bring">bring</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="come">come</span> <span word="back">back</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="Canada">Canada</span> <span word="next">next</span> <span word="month">month</span>.</p><p> <span word="Please">Please</span> <span word="accept">accept</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="sincere">sincere</span> <span word="apologies">apologies</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="oversight">oversight</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="look">look</span> <span word="forward">forward</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="hearing">hearing</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="earliest">earliest</span> <span word="convenience">convenience</span>.</p><p> </p>
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