考研英语作文范文批改(173)
<p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="music">music</span> <span word="fans">fans</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="Chengdu">Chengdu</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="see">see</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="possible">possible</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="provide">provide</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="information">information</span> <span word="regarding">regarding</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="New">New</span> <span word="Year">Year</span> <span word="Concert">Concert</span>.</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="planning">planning</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="see">see</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="concert">concert</span>, <span word="so">so</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="need">need</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="know">know</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="three">three</span>(加一个被<span word="three">three</span>修饰的名词). <span word="First">First</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="all">all</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="want">want</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="confirm">confirm</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="date">date</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="concert">concert</span>. <span word="Secondly">Secondly</span>, <span word="where">where</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="concerts">concerts</span> <span word="place">place</span>? <span word="Thirdly">Thirdly</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="bus">bus</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="get">get</span> <span word="the">the</span>(去掉) <span word="there">there</span>?</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="inquire">inquire</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="please">please</span> <span word="send">send</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="relevant">relevant</span> <span word="booklets">booklets</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="above">above</span>-<span word="mentioned">mentioned</span> <span word="aspects">aspects</span>?(这是个陈述句，用句号。这句话用在这里比较生硬，很明显是模板中的内容。)<span word="Thank">Thank</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="consideration">consideration</span>, <span word="your">your</span> <span word="prompt">prompt</span> <span word="attention">attention</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="highly">highly</span> <span word="appreciated">appreciated</span>.</p><p> </p>
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