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<p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="organizing">organizing</span>(<span word="would">would</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="do">do</span>) <span word="a">a</span> <span word="group">group</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="student">student</span>(加不定式<span word="to">to</span>) <span word="learn">learn</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="history">history</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="pay">pay</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="visit">visit</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="old">old</span> <span word="town">town</span>.(整理一下这句话，太对的不定式) <span word="Therefore">Therefore</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="see">see</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="possible">possible</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="provide">provide</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="information">information</span> <span word="concerning">concerning</span> <span word="visited">visited</span> <span word="details">details</span>.</p><p> <span word="First">First</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="all">all</span>, <span word="what">what</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="daily">daily</span> <span word="opening">opening</span> <span word="hours">hours</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="old">old</span> <span word="town">town</span> <span word="opened">opened</span> <span word="around">around</span>(这句话在这里要表达什么意思?古城是否营业?)?</p><p> <span word="Secondly">Secondly</span>, <span word="if">if</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="have">have</span>(去掉，<span word="there">there</span> <span word="be">be</span>句型，<span word="is">is</span>作主语) <span word="shows">shows</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="spread">spread</span> <span word="characteristic">characteristic</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="old">old</span> <span word="town">town</span>.</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="last">last</span> <span word="but">but</span> (加<span word="not">not</span>) <span word="least">least</span>, <span word="do">do</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="guide">guide</span>? <span word="We">We</span> <span word="want">want</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="konw">konw</span>(拼写错误) <span word="more">more</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="old">old</span> <span word="town">town</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="study">study</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="looking">looking</span> <span word="forward">forward</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="favorable">favorable</span> <span word="reply">reply</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="earliest">earliest</span> <span word="convenience">convenience</span>.</p><p> </p>
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