考研英语复习资料考研英语作文范文的批改56
<p> 考研英语待批改作文：</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Sir">Sir</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="Madam">Madam</span>,</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="senior">senior</span> <span word="undergraduate">undergraduate</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="department">department</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="financial">financial</span> <span word="management">management</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Xuzhou">Xuzhou</span> <span word="Normal">Normal</span> <span word="University">University</span>.<span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="letter">letter</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="purpose">purpose</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="applying">applying</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="admission">admission</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="recetly">recetly</span> <span word="advertised">advertised</span> <span word="position">position</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="accountant">accountant</span>.</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="sure">sure</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="qualified">qualified</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="it">it</span>.<span word="To">To</span> <span word="begin">begin</span> <span word="with">with</span>,<span word="enclose">enclose</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="letter">letter</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="resume">resume</span>,<span word="which">which</span> <span word="further">further</span> <span word="detail">detail</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="academic">academic</span> <span word="qualifications">qualifications</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="experience">experience</span>.<span word="Then">Then</span>,<span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="familaring">familaring</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="Microsofe">Microsofe</span> <span word="Word">Word</span>,<span word="Excel">Excel</span>,<span word="but">but</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="ability">ability</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="independently">independently</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="organizational">organizational</span> <span word="skills">skills</span>.<span word="Last">Last</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="least">least</span>,<span word="my">my</span> <span word="prudent">prudent</span> <span word="personality">personality</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="suited">suited</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="study">study</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="prestigious">prestigious</span> <span word="working">working</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="accountant">accountant</span>.</p><p> <span word="Words">Words</span> <span word="fail">fail</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="wish">wish</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="express">express</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="sincere">sincere</span> <span word="gratitude">gratitude</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="render">render</span> <span word="me">me</span>.<span word="I">I</span> <span word="look">look</span> <span word="forward">forward</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="favorable">favorable</span> <span word="reply">reply</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="earliest">earliest</span> <span word="convenience">convenience</span>.</p><p> <span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="turly">turly</span>,</p><p> <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span></p><p> 考研英语作文批改点评如下：</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Sir">Sir</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="Madam">Madam</span>,</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="sure">sure</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="qualified">qualified</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="it">it</span>. <span word="To">To</span> <span word="begin">begin</span> <span word="with">with</span>, <span word="enclose">enclose</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="letter">letter</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="resume">resume</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="further">further</span> <span word="detail">detail</span>(应该用第三人称单数形式) <span word="my">my</span> <span word="academic">academic</span> <span word="qualifications">qualifications</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="experience">experience</span>. <span word="Then">Then</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="only">only</span>(应该改为<span word="not">not</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span>，与后面的格式保持一致) <span word="familaring">familaring</span>(拼写错误) <span word="with">with</span> <span word="Microsofe">Microsofe</span>(拼写错误) <span word="Word">Word</span>, <span word="Excel">Excel</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="ability">ability</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="independently">independently</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="organizational">organizational</span> <span word="skills">skills</span>. <span word="Last">Last</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="least">least</span>, <span word="my">my</span> <span word="prudent">prudent</span> <span word="personality">personality</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="suited">suited</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="study">study</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="prestigious">prestigious</span> <span word="working">working</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="accountant">accountant</span>.</p>
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