考研英语复习资料考研英语作文范文的批改33
<p> <span word="Im">Im</span> <span word="writting">writting</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="apply">apply</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="position">position</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="advertisement">advertisement</span>.<span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="grateful">grateful</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="youre">youre</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="kind">kind</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="application">application</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="consideration">consideration</span>.</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="find">find</span> <span word="myself">myself</span> <span word="quite">quite</span> <span word="fit">fit</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="position">position</span>-<span word="accountant">accountant</span>.<span word="To">To</span> <span word="begin">begin</span> <span word="with">with</span>,<span word="my">my</span> <span word="major">major</span> <span word="subject">subject</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="account">account</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="university">university</span>.<span word="Then">Then</span>,<span word="Im">Im</span> <span word="studying">studying</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="CPA">CPA</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="certificates">certificates</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="well">well</span>.<span word="Im">Im</span> <span word="sure">sure</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="preparation">preparation</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="conform">conform</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="job">job</span>.</p><p> <span word="Thanks">Thanks</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="time">time</span> .<span word="I">I</span> <span word="wish">wish</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="chance">chance</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="interview">interview</span>. <span word="Look">Look</span> <span word="forward">forward</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="reply">reply</span>.</p><p> <span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="sincerely">sincerely</span>,</p><p> <span word="LiMing">LiMing</span></p><p> 考研英语作文批改点评如下：</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="sir">sir</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="madam">madam</span>(<span word="Sir">Sir</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="Madam">Madam</span>), <span word="Im">Im</span> <span word="writting">writting</span>(拼写错误<span word="writing">writing</span>)<span word="to">to</span> <span word="apply">apply</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="position">position</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="advertisement">advertisement</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="grateful">grateful</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="youre">youre</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="kind">kind</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="application">application</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="consideration">consideration</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="find">find</span> <span word="myself">myself</span> <span word="quite">quite</span> <span word="fit">fit</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="position">position</span>-<span word="accountant">accountant</span>. <span word="To">To</span> <span word="begin">begin</span> <span word="with">with</span>, <span word="my">my</span> <span word="major">major</span> <span word="subject">subject</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="account">account</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="university">university</span>. <span word="Then">Then</span>, <span word="Im">Im</span> <span word="studying">studying</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="CPA">CPA</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="certificates">certificates</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="well">well</span>. <span word="Im">Im</span> <span word="sure">sure</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="preparation">preparation</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="conform">conform</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="job">job</span>. <span word="Thanks">Thanks</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="time">time</span> .<span word="I">I</span> <span word="wish">wish</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="chance">chance</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="interview">interview</span>. <span word="Look">Look</span> <span word="forward">forward</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="reply">reply</span>. 【<span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="sincerely">sincerely</span>, <span word="LiMing">LiMing</span>】(落款部分写在右下角) 点评：5-6分</p><p> 内容有点少，第二段可以适当的加一两句话，让你自己看上去更有吸引力。第一段的第二句话可以放在最后一段。</p><p> </p>
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