考研英语复习资料考研英语作文范文的批改24
<p> 考研英语待批改作文：</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Sir">Sir</span>/<span word="Madam">Madam</span></p><p> <span word="Im">Im</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="apply">apply</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="position">position</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="provided">provided</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="company">company</span>.<span word="Yesterday">Yesterday</span>,<span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="looked">looked</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="recruit">recruit</span> <span word="information">information</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="newspaper">newspaper</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="found">found</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="job">job</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="fall">fall</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="previous">previous</span> <span word="training">training</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="strength">strength</span>,</p><p> <span word="To">To</span> <span word="begin">begin</span> <span word="with">with</span>,<span word="I">I</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="graduated">graduated</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="BeijingUniversity">BeijingUniversity</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="major">major</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="International">International</span> <span word="Business">Business</span> <span word="Management">Management</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="July">July</span> 2010.<span word="Morever">Morever</span>,<span word="from">from</span> <span word="July">July</span> 2010 <span word="to">to</span> <span word="June">June</span> 2011,<span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="worked">worked</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Bank">Bank</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="China">China</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="secretary">secretary</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="deputy">deputy</span> <span word="manager">manager</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="marketing">marketing</span>.<span word="Inaddition">Inaddition</span>,<span word="I">I</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="familiarity">familiarity</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="Microsoft">Microsoft</span> <span word="Word">Word</span> ,<span word="Excel">Excel</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="ability">ability</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="independently">independently</span>.</p><p> <span word="Sincerely">Sincerely</span> <span word="Yours">Yours</span>,</p><p> <span word="LiMing">LiMing</span></p><p> 考研英语作文批改点评如下：</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Sir">Sir</span>/<span word="Madam">Madam</span>Im writing to apply the position which is provided by your company. Yesterday, I have looked the recruit information in the newspaper and I found the job is very fall in with my previous training and strength,To begin with, I was graduated from BeijingUniversity who major in International Business Management in July 2010.Morever, from July 2010 to June 2011, I have worked in the Bank of China as a secretary to deputy(这里需要一个动词) manager of marketing. Inaddition(分开In addition), I was(应该用am，不能说是过去数量应用) familiarity with Microsoft Word, Excel and have the ability to work independently.I really wish to gain a chance to(建议用of) interview. Thank you for your time and consideration,(加连词and) looking forward to your reply. Sincerely Yours, LiMing(落款部分要写在右下角) 点评：7分写的还是不错的，不要在格式上丢分，否则太可惜了。</p>
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