考研英语复习资料考研英语作文范文的批改31
<p> <span word="Sincerely">Sincerely</span>,</p><p> <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span></p><p> 考研英语作文批改点评如下：</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Sir">Sir</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="Madam">Madam</span>,</p><p> <span word="Im">Im</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="graduate">graduate</span> <span word="student">student</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="Zhejiang">Zhejiang</span> <span word="Sci">Sci</span>-<span word="Tech">Tech</span> <span word="University">University</span>. <span word="Through">Through</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="newspeper">newspeper</span>(拼写错误), <span word="I">I</span> <span word="got">got</span> <span word="a">a</span>(如果要用不定冠词，要用<span word="an">an</span>，建议使用定冠词<span word="the">the</span>) <span word="imformation">imformation</span>(拼写错误) <span word="which">which</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="firm">firm</span> <span word="needs">needs</span> <span word="several">several</span> <span word="desingers">desingers</span>(拼写错误). <span word="I">I</span> <span word="really">really</span> <span word="hope">hope</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="employed">employed</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="you">you</span>. <span word="There">There</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="indicate">indicate</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="job">job</span> <span word="conform">conform</span>(这里不能用动词原形，如果是<span word="indicate">indicate</span>后省略宾语从句的<span word="that">that</span>，<span word="conform">conform</span>应该用第三人称单数，如果不是从句，双宾语应该用动名词形式)<span word="to">to</span> <span word="me">me</span>. <span word="To">To</span> <span word="begin">begin</span> <span word="with">with</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="designing">designing</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="study">study</span>(这里应该用完成时<span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="studied">studied</span>) <span word="painting">painting</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="ten">ten</span> <span word="years">years</span>, <span word="so">so</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="position">position</span> <span word="does">does</span> <span word="fall">fall</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="former">former</span> <span word="preparation">preparation</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="addition">addition</span>, <span word="my">my</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="awarded">awarded</span>(应该用被动语态，改为<span word="was">was</span> <span word="awarded">awarded</span> <span word="by">by</span>/<span word="in">in</span>) <span word="two">two</span> <span word="designing">designing</span> <span word="competition">competition</span> <span word="last">last</span> <span word="year">year</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="believe">believe</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="ability">ability</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="demand">demand</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="job">job</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="wish">wish</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="recive">recive</span>(拼写错误) <span word="you">you</span>(这里应该用所有格形式<span word="your">your</span>) <span word="reply">reply</span> <span word="soon">soon</span>. <span word="Thank">Thank</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="consideration">consideration</span>. 【<span word="Sincerely">Sincerely</span>,(这里一般用<span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="sincerely">sincerely</span>，) <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span>】(落款部分写在文章的右下方) 点评：5-6分首先是拼写错误有点多，而且是一些常见词。然后需要注意细节上的问题。第二段如果简单加一条你的<span word="personality">personality</span>会更好。</p><p> </p>
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