考研英语复习资料考研英语作文范文的批改25
<p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="graduate">graduate</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Chinese">Chinese</span> <span word="Department">Department</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Tianjin">Tianjin</span> <span word="University">University</span>.<span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="applying">applying</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="position">position</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="staff">staff</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="advertised">advertised</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="newspaper">newspaper</span>.<span word="Enclosed">Enclosed</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="letter">letter</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="resume">resume</span>.</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="sure">sure</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="perfect">perfect</span> <span word="candidate">candidate</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="job">job</span>.<span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="careful">careful</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="friendly">friendly</span> <span word="person">person</span>,<span word="and">and</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="previous">previous</span> <span word="training">training</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="strength">strength</span> <span word="fall">fall</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="position">position</span>.</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="wish">wish</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="meet">meet</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="convenience">convenience</span>.<span word="Thank">Thank</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="consideration">consideration</span>.</p><p> <span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="turly">turly</span>,</p><p> <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span></p><p> 考研英语作文批改点评如下：</p><p> <span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="turly">turly</span>, Li Ming (落款部分写在右下角) 点评：5分。第一段的内容量与第二段的内容量形成鲜明的对比，让人觉得是时间不够仓促写出的。第一段可以简明的写出在哪里看到招聘信息然后应聘什么职位。第二段写你所学的专业、工作经验、个人性格等内容。Dear Sir or Madam,</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="graduate">graduate</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Chinese">Chinese</span> <span word="Department">Department</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span>(去掉) <span word="Tianjin">Tianjin</span> <span word="University">University</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="applying">applying</span>(前边的<span word="to">to</span>是动词不定式，这里应该用原型) <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="position">position</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="staff">staff</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="advertised">advertised</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="newspaper">newspaper</span>. <span word="Enclosed">Enclosed</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="letter">letter</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="resume">resume</span>.</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="sure">sure</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="perfect">perfect</span> <span word="candidate">candidate</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="job">job</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="careful">careful</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="friendly">friendly</span> <span word="person">person</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="previous">previous</span> <span word="training">training</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="strength">strength</span> <span word="fall">fall</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="position">position</span>.</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="wish">wish</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="meet">meet</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="convenience">convenience</span>. <span word="Thank">Thank</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="consideration">consideration</span>.</p>
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