考研英语复习资料考研英语作文范文的批改14
<p> 考研英语待批改作文：</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="sir">sir</span>,</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="position">position</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="company">company</span> <span word="advertising">advertising</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="TIME">TIME</span> <span word="newspaper">newspaper</span>.<span word="I">I</span> <span word="believe">believe</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="fit">fit</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="experience">experience</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="knowledge">knowledge</span>.</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="worked">worked</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="famous">famous</span> <span word="IT">IT</span> <span word="company">company</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="manager">manager</span>.<span word="I">I</span> <span word="solved">solved</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="problems">problems</span> <span word="there">there</span>.<span word="With">With</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="going">going</span> ,<span word="I">I</span> <span word="accumulate">accumulate</span> <span word="amount">amount</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="experience">experience</span>.<span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="sure">sure</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="comptent">comptent</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="position">position</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="manager">manager</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="employing">employing</span>.<span word="As">As</span> <span word="reading">reading</span> <span word="lots">lots</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="books">books</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="psychology">psychology</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="understand">understand</span> <span word="behavior">behavior</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="employers">employers</span>.<span word="Therefore">Therefore</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="manage">manage</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="better">better</span>.<span word="You">You</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="never">never</span> <span word="regret">regret</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="employed">employed</span> <span word="me">me</span>.</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="look">look</span> <span word="forward">forward</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="repaly">repaly</span>.</p><p> <span word="Sincerely">Sincerely</span> <span word="yours">yours</span>,</p><p> <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="ming">ming</span></p><p> 考研英语作文批改点评如下：</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="sir">sir</span>(因为不知道是男士还是女士，改成<span word="Sir">Sir</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="Madam">Madam</span>),<span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="position">position</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="company">company</span> <span word="advertising">advertising</span>(这里应该用动词的过去时<span word="advertised">advertised</span>) <span word="on">on</span> <span word="TIME">TIME</span> <span word="newspaper">newspaper</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="believe">believe</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="fit">fit</span>(这里需要用一个形容词) <span word="for">for</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="experience">experience</span> <span word="an">an</span>(<span word="and">and</span>?) <span word="knowledge">knowledge</span>.</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="had">had</span>(去掉，后面的<span word="work">work</span>是动词) <span word="worked">worked</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="famous">famous</span> <span word="IT">IT</span> <span word="company">company</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="manager">manager</span>(<span word="for">for</span> <span word="X">X</span> <span word="years">years</span>). <span word="I">I</span> <span word="solved">solved</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="problems">problems</span> <span word="there">there</span>. <span word="With">With</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="going">going</span>(<span word="going">going</span> <span word="on">on</span>), <span word="I">I</span> <span word="accumulate">accumulate</span> <span word="amount">amount</span> <span word="of">of</span>(<span word="an">an</span> <span word="amount">amount</span> <span word="of">of</span>或是<span word="amounts">amounts</span> <span word="of">of</span>) <span word="experience">experience</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="sure">sure</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="comptent">comptent</span>(拼写错误，<span word="competent">competent</span>) <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="position">position</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="manager">manager</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="employing">employing</span>(这里要表达的是什么意思?). <span word="As">As</span> <span word="reading">reading</span> <span word="lots">lots</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="books">books</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="psychology">psychology</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="understand">understand</span> (加定冠词<span word="the">the</span>) <span word="behavior">behavior</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="employers">employers</span>. <span word="Therefore">Therefore</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="manage">manage</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="better">better</span>. <span word="You">You</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="never">never</span> <span word="regret">regret</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="employed">employed</span> <span word="me">me</span>.</p>
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