考研英语复习资料考研英语作文范文的批改17
<p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="apply">apply</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="positing">positing</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Internet">Internet</span> <span word="administrators">administrators</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="advertised">advertised</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="yesterdays">yesterdays</span> <span word="NEWORLTAL">NEWORLTAL</span>.</p><p> <span word="To">To</span> <span word="briefly">briefly</span> <span word="introduce">introduce</span> <span word="myself">myself</span> ,<span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="graduate">graduate</span> <span word="student">student</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Inner">Inner</span> <span word="Mongolia">Mongolia</span> <span word="University">University</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="science">science</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="Technolgy">Technolgy</span> <span word="majoring">majoring</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="computing">computing</span> <span word="adminitration">adminitration</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="expect">expect</span> <span word="graduation">graduation</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="June">June</span>.<span word="Not">Not</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="excellent">excellent</span> <span word="academic">academic</span> <span word="performance">performance</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="courses">courses</span> .<span word="I">I</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="possess">possess</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="rich">rich</span> <span word="experience">experience</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="assisting">assisting</span> <span word="administration">administration</span>.<span word="My">My</span> <span word="interactive">interactive</span> <span word="personal">personal</span> <span word="skill">skill</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="teamwork">teamwork</span> <span word="spirit">spirit</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="appropriate">appropriate</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="post">post</span>.</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="grateful">grateful</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="arrange">arrange</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="interview">interview</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="earliest">earliest</span> <span word="convenience">convenience</span>.</p><p> <span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="sincerely">sincerely</span></p><p> <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span></p><p> 考研英语作文批改点评如下：</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="sir">sir</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="madam">madam</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="apply">apply</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="positing">positing</span>(<span word="position">position</span>) <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Internet">Internet</span> <span word="administrators">administrators</span>(用单数，因为你申请的是一个人的一个职位) <span word="you">you</span> <span word="advertised">advertised</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="yesterdays">yesterdays</span> <span word="NEWORLTAL">NEWORLTAL</span>. <span word="To">To</span> <span word="briefly">briefly</span> <span word="introduce">introduce</span> <span word="myself">myself</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="graduate">graduate</span> <span word="student">student</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Inner">Inner</span> <span word="Mongolia">Mongolia</span> <span word="University">University</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="science">science</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="Technolgy">Technolgy</span>(这里表达的太复杂了，去掉这一部分，或者是说<span word="XX">XX</span> <span word="department">department</span>) <span word="majoring">majoring</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="computing">computing</span> <span word="adminitration">adminitration</span>(拼写错误，<span word="administration">administration</span>) <span word="and">and</span> <span word="expect">expect</span> <span word="graduation">graduation</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="June">June</span>. <span word="Not">Not</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="excellent">excellent</span> <span word="academic">academic</span> <span word="performance">performance</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="courses">courses</span> .<span word="I">I</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="possess">possess</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="rich">rich</span> <span word="experience">experience</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="assisting">assisting</span> <span word="administration">administration</span>. <span word="My">My</span> <span word="interactive">interactive</span> <span word="personal">personal</span> <span word="skill">skill</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="teamwork">teamwork</span> <span word="spirit">spirit</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="appropriate">appropriate</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="post">post</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="grateful">grateful</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="arrange">arrange</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="interview">interview</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="earliest">earliest</span> <span word="convenience">convenience</span>. <span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="sincerely">sincerely</span>(加逗号) <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span> 点评：7分写的还不错。需要加强语言的表达能力。</p>
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