考研英语复习资料考研英语作文范文的批改21
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word="on">on</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="companys">companys</span> <span word="website">website</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="insterested">insterested</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="position">position</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="want">want</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="apply">apply</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="it">it</span>.</p><p> <span word="Next">Next</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="want">want</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="talk">talk</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="capability">capability</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="experience">experience</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="applying">applying</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="job">job</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="graduated">graduated</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="university">university</span> <span word="nearly">nearly</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="year">year</span>. <span word="My">My</span> <span word="major">major</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="English">English</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="after">after</span> <span word="finishing">finishing</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="university">university</span> <span word="life">life</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="worked">worked</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="SN">SN</span> <span word="company">company</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="afforded">afforded</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="shop">shop</span> <span word="HR">HR</span> <span word="assistant">assistant</span>.<span word="So">So</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="skillfully">skillfully</span> <span word="operate">operate</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="five">five</span> <span word="object">object</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="human">human</span></p><p> <span word="resource">resource</span>:<span word="Salary">Salary</span>,<span word="Recruitment">Recruitment</span>,<span word="Trainging">Trainging</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="on">on</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="aslo">aslo</span> <span word="skillfully">skillfully</span> <span word="operate">operate</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Word">Word</span> ,<span word="Excel">Excel</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="PPT">PPT</span>. <span word="My">My</span> <span word="deposition">deposition</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="outer">outer</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="ability">ability</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="talking">talking</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="communicating">communicating</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="somebody">somebody</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="great">great</span>.</p><p> <span word="So">So</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="feel">feel</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="alreadly">alreadly</span> <span word="fit">fit</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="needing">needing</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="recruitng">recruitng</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="position">position</span>, <span word="if">if</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="chance">chance</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="trying">trying</span> <span word="it">it</span> ,<span word="I">I</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="best">best</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="positon">positon</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="appreciate">appreciate</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="apply">apply</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="soon">soon</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="possibie">possibie</span>. <span word="My">My</span> <span word="contacted">contacted</span> <span word="pnone">pnone</span> <span word="number">number</span> <span word="is">is</span> 13757194566.</p><p> <span word="Yous">Yous</span> <span word="sincerely">sincerely</span></p><p> <span word="LiMing">LiMing</span></p><p> 2011,16<span word="th">th</span>,<span word="October">October</span></p><p> 考研英语作文批改点评如下：</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Miss">Miss</span> <span word="Chen">Chen</span>:(改成逗号)</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="thank">thank</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="spend">spend</span>(<span word="thank">thank</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="spending">spending</span>) <span word="your">your</span> <span word="precious">precious</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="reading">reading</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="letter">letter</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="reason">reason</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="letter">letter</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="me">me</span>(去掉，或者改成<span word="of">of</span> <span word="me">me</span>，建议去掉) <span word="is">is</span>(加<span word="that">that</span>，这里的<span word="that">that</span>不能省略) <span word="today">today</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="find">find</span>(应该用过去式，因为这个动作已经发生) <span word="the">the</span> <span word="message">message</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="recruiting">recruiting</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="HR">HR</span> <span word="assistant">assistant</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="companys">companys</span> <span word="website">website</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="insterested">insterested</span>(<span word="am">am</span> <span word="interested">interested</span>) <span word="in">in</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="position">position</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="want">want</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="apply">apply</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="it">it</span>.</p>
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