考研英语复习资料考研英语作文范文的批改1
<p> 考研英语待批改作文：</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Sir">Sir</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="Madam">Madam</span>,</p><p> <span word="Im">Im</span> <span word="writting">writting</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="letter">letter</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="order">order</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="applying">applying</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="recently">recently</span> <span word="advrtised">advrtised</span> <span word="position">position</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="interior">interior</span> <span word="designer">designer</span> .<span word="I">I</span> <span word="obtain">obtain</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="news">news</span> <span word="form">form</span> <span word="newpaer">newpaer</span>.<span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="suer">suer</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="qualitied">qualitied</span> <span word="it">it</span> .</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="interior">interior</span> <span word="designer">designer</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="Department">Department</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Envionmental">Envionmental</span> <span word="Art">Art</span>.<span word="With">With</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="letter">letter</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="proved">proved</span> <span word="detail">detail</span> <span word="resume">resume</span>. <span word="First">First</span> ,<span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="experience">experience</span> <span word="for">for</span> 7 <span word="years">years</span>. <span word="Second">Second</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="acquiet">acquiet</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="detail">detail</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="struction">struction</span> ,<span word="Equipment">Equipment</span>, <span word="local">local</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="national">national</span> <span word="lows">lows</span>. <span word="Third">Third</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="ripidly">ripidly</span> <span word="operating">operating</span> <span word="computer">computer</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="addition">addition</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="led">led</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="team">team</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="owing">owing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="cheerful">cheerful</span> <span word="personality">personality</span>.</p><p> <span word="Finally">Finally</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="look">look</span> <span word="forward">forward</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="reply">reply</span>,<span word="and">and</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="attending">attending</span> <span word="yours">yours</span> <span word="company">company</span>.</p><p> <span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="sincerely">sincerely</span></p><p> <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span></p><p> 考研英语作文批改点评如下：</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Sir">Sir</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="Madam">Madam</span>,</p><p> <span word="Im">Im</span> <span word="writting">writting</span>(拼写错误，<span word="writing">writing</span>) <span word="this">this</span> <span word="letter">letter</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="order">order</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="applying">applying</span>(改成<span word="apply">apply</span>，<span word="in">in</span> <span word="order">order</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="do">do</span>) <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="recently">recently</span> <span word="advrtised">advrtised</span>(拼写错误，<span word="advertised">advertised</span>) <span word="position">position</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="interior">interior</span> <span word="designer">designer</span> .<span word="I">I</span> <span word="obtain">obtain</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="news">news</span> <span word="form">form</span>(加冠词)<span word="newpaer">newpaer</span>(拼写错误，<span word="newspaper">newspaper</span>). <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="suer">suer</span>(拼写错误，<span word="sure">sure</span>) <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="qualitied">qualitied</span>(拼写错误，<span word="qualified">qualified</span> <span word="to">to</span>，加介词<span word="to">to</span>) <span word="it">it</span> .</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="a">a</span>(应该用不定冠词<span word="an">an</span>，后面是以元音开头的词语) <span word="interior">interior</span> <span word="designer">designer</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="Department">Department</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Envionmental">Envionmental</span>(拼写错误，<span word="environmental">environmental</span>) <span word="Art">Art</span>. <span word="With">With</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="letter">letter</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="proved">proved</span> <span word="detail">detail</span> <span word="resume">resume</span>. <span word="First">First</span> ,<span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="experience">experience</span> <span word="for">for</span> 7 <span word="years">years</span>(可以说<span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="worked">worked</span> <span word="for">for</span> 7 <span word="years">years</span>或是<span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="seven">seven</span>-<span word="year">year</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="experience">experience</span>，但是不能将两种说话合在一起说). <span word="Second">Second</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="acquiet">acquiet</span>(拼写错误，<span word="acquired">acquired</span>?) <span word="many">many</span> <span word="detail">detail</span>(应该用复数<span word="details">details</span>) <span word="of">of</span> <span word="struction">struction</span>(拼写错误，<span word="structure">structure</span>?) , <span word="Equipment">Equipment</span>(<span word="e">e</span>不用大写), <span word="local">local</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="national">national</span> <span word="lows">lows</span>. <span word="Third">Third</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="ripidly">ripidly</span>(拼写错误，<span word="rapidly">rapidly</span>) <span word="operating">operating</span> <span word="computer">computer</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="addition">addition</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="led">led</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="team">team</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="owing">owing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="cheerful">cheerful</span> <span word="personality">personality</span>.</p>
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