考研作文批改范例1
<p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="children">children</span> <span word="committee">committee</span>:（建议改为<span word="To">To</span> <span word="whom">whom</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="concern">concern</span>，或者是<span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="sir">sir</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="Madam">Madam</span>，） <span word="I">I</span> <span word="want">want</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="do">do</span> （增加<span word="something">something</span>） <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="children">children</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="distance">distance</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="gave">gave</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="children">children</span> 50 <span word="yuan">yuan</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="year">year</span>（<span word="I">I</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="give">give</span> 50 <span word="yuan">yuan</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="child">child</span> <span word="each">each</span> <span word="year">year</span>） <span word="on">on</span> <span word="plan">plan</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="thing">thing</span>（改为 <span word="although">although</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="far">far</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="enough">enough</span>）. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="understand">understand</span> <span word="me">me</span> , <span word="I">I</span> <span word="cannot">cannot</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="lot">lot</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="thing">thing</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="distance">distance</span> <span word="children">children</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="understand">understand</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="plan">plan</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="often">often</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="office">office</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="knowlegal">knowlegal</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="them">them</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="it">it</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="want">want</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="it">it</span>, <span word="so">so</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="advice">advice</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="believe">believe</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="beatiful">beatiful</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="stronger">stronger</span> ,<span word="but">but</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="problem">problem</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="family">family</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="accept">accept</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="thing">thing</span>. <span word="That">That</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="life">life</span>.（内容不符合写作要求，语言表达错误过多！） <span word="Your">Your</span> <span word="friend">friend</span>,</p><p> </p>
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