考研英语小作文批改邀请信5-7分例文1
<p> 考研英语待批改作文：</p><p> 5-7分</p><p> 第一篇</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Kate">Kate</span>,</p><p> <span word="There">There</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="Christmas">Christmas</span> <span word="party">party</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="English">English</span> <span word="corner">corner</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="Dec">Dec</span>.25<span word="th">th</span>. <span word="We">We</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="honored">honored</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="us">us</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="occasion">occasion</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="start">start</span> <span word="at">at</span> 6 <span word="p">p</span>.<span word="m">m</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="followed">followed</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="game">game</span>. <span word="At">At</span> <span word="around">around</span> 7 <span word="p">p</span>.<span word="m">m</span>. <span word="a">a</span> <span word="meeting">meeting</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="held">held</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="really">really</span> <span word="hope">hope</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="it">it</span>. <span word="RSVP">RSVP</span> <span word="before">before</span> <span word="Dec">Dec</span>.24<span word="th">th</span>.</p><p> <span word="Campus">Campus</span> <span word="English">English</span> <span word="Corner">Corner</span></p><p> <span word="October">October</span> 22, 2012</p><p> 考研英语作文批改点评如下：</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Kate">Kate</span>,</p><p> <span word="There">There</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="Christmas">Christmas</span> <span word="party">party</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="English">English</span> <span word="corner">corner</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="Dec">Dec</span>.25<span word="th">th</span>. <span word="We">We</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="honored">honored</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="us">us</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="occasion">occasion</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="start">start</span> <span word="at">at</span> 6 <span word="p">p</span>.<span word="m">m</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="followed">followed</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="game">game</span>. <span word="At">At</span> <span word="around">around</span> 7 <span word="p">p</span>.<span word="m">m</span>. <span word="a">a</span> <span word="meeting">meeting</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="held">held</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="really">really</span> <span word="hope">hope</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="it">it</span>. <span word="RSVP">RSVP</span> <span word="before">before</span> <span word="Dec">Dec</span>.24<span word="th">th</span>.</p><p> (加<span word="Sincerely">Sincerely</span> <span word="yours">yours</span>，) <span word="Campus">Campus</span> <span word="English">English</span> <span word="Corner">Corner</span></p><p> <span word="October">October</span> 22, 2012(删除)</p><p> 5分</p><p> 同学你好，考研小作文的字数要求是100词左右，你的作文虽然没有大问题，但是包含的内容太少，句型变换等也太少了。另外，要注意书信的格式。</p><p> </p>
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