考研英语小作文批改道歉信0-4分例文2
<p> 考研英语待批改作文：</p><p> 0-4分</p><p> 第二篇</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Nero">Nero</span>，</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="truly">truly</span> <span word="sorry">sorry</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="broke">broke</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="appointment">appointment</span>.</p><p> <span word="You">You</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="agreed">agreed</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="dinner">dinner</span> <span word="together">together</span> <span word="tonight">tonight</span> , <span word="but">but</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="receiced">receiced</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="urgent">urgent</span> <span word="phone">phone</span> <span word="call">call</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="office">office</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="leave">leave</span> <span word="immediately">immediately</span> . <span word="Due">Due</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="mistake">mistake</span> , <span word="you">you</span> <span word="must">must</span> <span word="felt">felt</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="inconvenience">inconvenience</span> . <span word="If">If</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="for">for</span> , <span word="we">we</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="wonderful">wonderful</span> <span word="memory">memory</span> . <span word="You">You</span> <span word="told">told</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="every">every</span> <span word="Sunday">Sunday</span> , <span word="lets">lets</span> <span word="set">set</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="appointment">appointment</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="next">next</span> <span word="Sunday">Sunday</span> <span word="evening">evening</span>.</p><p> <span word="Once">Once</span> <span word="again">again</span>， <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="sorry">sorry</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="any">any</span> <span word="inconvenience">inconvenience</span> <span word="caused">caused</span> . <span word="Hope">Hope</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="accept">accept</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="apologies">apologies</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="understand">understand</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="situation">situation</span>.</p><p> <span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="sincerely">sincerely</span>，</p><p> <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span></p><p> 考研英语作文批改点评如下：</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Nero">Nero</span>，</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="truly">truly</span> <span word="sorry">sorry</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="broke">broke</span> <span word="an">an</span>(改为<span word="the">the</span>) <span word="appointment">appointment</span>.</p><p> <span word="You">You</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="agreedthat">agreedthat</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="dinner">dinner</span> <span word="together">together</span> <span word="tonight">tonight</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="receiced">receiced</span>(拼写错误，改为<span word="received">received</span>) <span word="an">an</span> <span word="urgent">urgent</span> <span word="phone">phone</span> <span word="call">call</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="office">office</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="leave">leave</span> <span word="immediately">immediately</span> . <span word="Due">Due</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="mistake">mistake</span> , <span word="you">you</span> <span word="must">must</span> <span word="felt">felt</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="inconvenience">inconvenience</span>. <span word="If">If</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="for">for</span>(改为<span word="If">If</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="hadnt">hadnt</span> <span word="left">left</span>) , <span word="we">we</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="wonderful">wonderful</span> <span word="memory">memory</span>. <span word="You">You</span> <span word="told">told</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="every">every</span> <span word="Sunday">Sunday</span> , <span word="lets">lets</span> <span word="set">set</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="appointment">appointment</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="next">next</span> <span word="Sunday">Sunday</span> <span word="evening">evening</span>.</p><p> <span word="Once">Once</span> <span word="again">again</span>， <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="sorry">sorry</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="any">any</span> <span word="inconvenience">inconvenience</span> <span word="caused">caused</span> . <span word="Hope">Hope</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="accept">accept</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="apologies">apologies</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="understand">understand</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="situation">situation</span>.</p>
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