考研英语小作文批改邀请信0-4分例文2
<p> 考研英语待批改作文：</p><p> 0-4分</p><p> 第二篇</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Mark">Mark</span>，</p><p> <span word="There">There</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="volunteer">volunteer</span> <span word="activitiy">activitiy</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Childrens">Childrens</span> <span word="Welfare">Welfare</span> <span word="Institute">Institute</span> <span word="Of">Of</span> <span word="Nanjing">Nanjing</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="weekend">weekend</span> . <span word="We">We</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="honored">honored</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="us">us</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="occasion">occasion</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="start">start</span> <span word="at">at</span> 08:00.<span word="This">This</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="followed">followed</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="arrangement">arrangement</span> .<span word="At">At</span> <span word="around">around</span>10:00, <span word="there">there</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="another">another</span> <span word="activity">activity</span> <span word="after">after</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="performance">performance</span>. <span word="All">All</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="going">going</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="Zhongshan">Zhongshan</span> <span word="park">park</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="Picnic">Picnic</span>, <span word="while">while</span> <span word="helping">helping</span> <span word="Lily">Lily</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="youngest">youngest</span> <span word="girl">girl</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="group">group</span>, <span word="to">to</span> <span word="celebrity">celebrity</span> <span word="her">her</span> <span word="birthday">birthday</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="really">really</span> <span word="hope">hope</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="it">it</span>. <span word="RSVP">RSVP</span> <span word="before">before</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="deadline">deadline</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="September">September</span> 15<span word="th">th</span>.</p><p> 考研英语作文批改点评如下：</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Mark">Mark</span>，</p><p> <span word="There">There</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="volunteer">volunteer</span> <span word="activitiy">activitiy</span>(拼写错误，改为<span word="activity">activity</span>) <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Childrens">Childrens</span> <span word="Welfare">Welfare</span> <span word="Institute">Institute</span> <span word="Of">Of</span> <span word="Nanjing">Nanjing</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="weekend">weekend</span> . <span word="We">We</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="honored">honored</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="us">us</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="occasion">occasion</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="start">start</span> <span word="at">at</span> 08:00.<span word="This">This</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="followed">followed</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="arrangement">arrangement</span>(此处应该写一个具体的活动) .<span word="At">At</span> <span word="around">around</span>10:00, <span word="there">there</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="another">another</span> <span word="activity">activity</span> <span word="after">after</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="performance">performance</span>(删除 ). <span word="All">All</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="going">going</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="Zhongshan">Zhongshan</span> <span word="park">park</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="Picnic">Picnic</span>, <span word="while">while</span> <span word="helping">helping</span> <span word="Lily">Lily</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="youngest">youngest</span> <span word="girl">girl</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="group">group</span>, <span word="to">to</span> <span word="celebrity">celebrity</span> <span word="her">her</span> <span word="birthday">birthday</span>.(给某人过生日，不要用<span word="help">help</span>)<span word="I">I</span> <span word="really">really</span> <span word="hope">hope</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="it">it</span>. <span word="RSVP">RSVP</span> <span word="before">before</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="deadline">deadline</span> <span word="for">for</span> (删除，<span word="RSVP">RSVP</span> <span word="before">before</span>的意思就是在之前通知我)<span word="September">September</span> 15<span word="th">th</span>.</p><p> 加<span word="Sincerely">Sincerely</span> <span word="yours">yours</span>，</p>
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