考研英语小作文批改道歉信0-4分例文1
<p> 考研英语待批改作文：</p><p> 0-4分</p><p> 第一篇</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Jone">Jone</span>,</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="truly">truly</span> <span word="sorry">sorry</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="able">able</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="participate">participate</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="academic">academic</span> <span word="activity">activity</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="economy">economy</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Chinas">Chinas</span> <span word="industry">industry</span> <span word="organized">organized</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="Shan">Shan</span> <span word="Dong">Dong</span> <span word="University">University</span>.</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="reason">reason</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="invested">invested</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="part">part</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Economic">Economic</span> <span word="Exhibition">Exhibition</span> <span word="hold">hold</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="world">world</span> <span word="economic">economic</span> <span word="organization">organization</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="academic">academic</span> <span word="critics">critics</span> <span word="during">during</span> <span word="October">October</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="December">December</span>. <span word="And">And</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="leave">leave</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="tomorrow">tomorrow</span> <span word="morning">morning</span>, <span word="so">so</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="participate">participate</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="activity">activity</span>. <span word="Once">Once</span> <span word="again">again</span>， <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="sorry">sorry</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="any">any</span> <span word="inconvenience">inconvenience</span> <span word="caused">caused</span>. <span word="Hope">Hope</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="accept">accept</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="apologies">apologies</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="understand">understand</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="situation">situation</span>.</p><p> <span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="sincerely">sincerely</span>,</p><p> <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span></p><p> 考研英语作文批改点评如下：</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Jone">Jone</span>,</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="truly">truly</span> <span word="sorry">sorry</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="able">able</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="participate">participate</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="academic">academic</span> <span word="activity">activity</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="economy">economy</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Chinas">Chinas</span> <span word="industry">industry</span> <span word="organized">organized</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="Shan">Shan</span> <span word="Dong">Dong</span> <span word="University">University</span>.</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="reason">reason</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span>{<span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="invested">invested</span>(用词不当)<span word="to">to</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="part">part</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Economic">Economic</span> <span word="Exhibition">Exhibition</span> <span word="hold">hold</span>(改为<span word="held">held</span>) <span word="by">by</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="world">world</span> <span word="economic">economic</span> <span word="organization">organization</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="academic">academic</span> <span word="critics">critics</span>｝ <span word="during">during</span>(改为<span word="from">from</span>) <span word="October">October</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="December">December</span>. <span word="And">And</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="leave">leave</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="tomorrow">tomorrow</span> <span word="morning">morning</span>, <span word="so">so</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="participate">participate</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="activity">activity</span>. <span word="Once">Once</span> <span word="again">again</span>，<span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="sorry">sorry</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="any">any</span> <span word="inconvenience">inconvenience</span> <span word="caused">caused</span>. <span word="Hope">Hope</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="accept">accept</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="apologies">apologies</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="understand">understand</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="situation">situation</span>.</p><p> <span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="sincerely">sincerely</span>,</p>
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