考研英语小作文批改投诉信0-4分例文5
<p> 考研英语待批改作文：</p><p> 0-4分</p><p> 第五篇</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Sir">Sir</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="Madam">Madam</span>,</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="bought">bought</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="mobile">mobile</span> <span word="phone">phone</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="online">online</span> <span word="store">store</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="July">July</span> 1. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="feel">feel</span> <span word="bad">bad</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="trouble">trouble</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="afraid">afraid</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="complaint">complaint</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="problems">problems</span> <span word="after">after</span> <span word="using">using</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="short">short</span> <span word="period">period</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="time">time</span>.</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="reason">reason</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="dissatisfaction">dissatisfaction</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="phone">phone</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="meet">meet</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="requirements">requirements</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="place">place</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="battery">battery</span> <span word="needs">needs</span> <span word="recharging">recharging</span> <span word="after">after</span> 5 <span word="hours">hours</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="use">use</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="addition">addition</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="internal">internal</span> <span word="mernory">mernory</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="too">too</span> <span word="small">small</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="store">store</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="song">song</span>. <span word="Under">Under</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="circumstances">circumstances</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="find">find</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="regretful">regretful</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="bring">bring</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="trouble">trouble</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="accept">accept</span> <span word="it">it</span>.</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="appreciate">appreciate</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="change">change</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="mpbile">mpbile</span> <span word="phone">phone</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="another">another</span> <span word="model">model</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="works">works</span> <span word="well">well</span>, <span word="preferably">preferably</span> <span word="return">return</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="full">full</span> <span word="refund">refund</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="matter">matter</span> <span word="settled">settled</span> <span word="by">by</span> 20 <span word="workdays">workdays</span>.</p><p> <span word="Thank">Thank</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="consideration">consideration</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="looking">looking</span> <span word="forward">forward</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="reply">reply</span>.</p><p> <span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="sincerely">sincerely</span>,</p><p> <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span></p><p> 考研英语作文批改点评如下：</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Sir">Sir</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="Madam">Madam</span>,</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="bought">bought</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="mobile">mobile</span> <span word="phone">phone</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="online">online</span> <span word="store">store</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="July">July</span> 1. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="feel">feel</span> <span word="bad">bad</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="trouble">trouble</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="afraid">afraid</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="complaint">complaint</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="problems">problems</span> <span word="after">after</span> <span word="using">using</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="short">short</span> <span word="period">period</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="time">time</span>.</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="reason">reason</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="dissatisfaction">dissatisfaction</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="phone">phone</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="meet">meet</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="requirements">requirements</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="place">place</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="battery">battery</span> <span word="needs">needs</span> <span word="recharging">recharging</span> <span word="after">after</span> 5 <span word="hours">hours</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="use">use</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="addition">addition</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="internal">internal</span> <span word="mernory">mernory</span>(单词拼写错误,改为<span word="memory">memory</span> <span word="card">card</span>) <span word="is">is</span> <span word="too">too</span> <span word="small">small</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="store">store</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="song">song</span>. <span word="Under">Under</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="circumstances">circumstances</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="find">find</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span>(删除) <span word="regretful">regretful</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="bring">bring</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="trouble">trouble</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="accept">accept</span> <span word="it">it</span>.(该句的意思是，由于上面提到的两个问题，使我感觉)</p>
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