考研英语小作文批改邀请信5-7分例文2
<p> 考研英语待批改作文：</p><p> 5-7分</p><p> 第二篇</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Miss">Miss</span> <span word="Yuan">Yuan</span>,</p><p> <span word="There">There</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="celebrity">celebrity</span> <span word="party">party</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="year">year</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="activity">activity</span> <span word="room">room</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="next">next</span> <span word="Saturday">Saturday</span>. <span word="We">We</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="honored">honored</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="us">us</span>.</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="occasion">occasion</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="start">start</span> <span word="at">at</span> 6 <span word="oclock">oclock</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="evening">evening</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="followed">followed</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="serious">serious</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="wonderful">wonderful</span> <span word="performances">performances</span> <span word="played">played</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="classmates">classmates</span>. <span word="At">At</span> <span word="around">around</span> 8 <span word="oclock">oclock</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="project">project</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="interaction">interaction</span> <span word="activities">activities</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="animate">animate</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="atmosphere">atmosphere</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="promote">promote</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="relationships">relationships</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="classmates">classmates</span>. <span word="Whats">Whats</span> <span word="more">more</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="prepared">prepared</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="gifts">gifts</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="presented">presented</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="winners">winners</span>.</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="really">really</span> <span word="hope">hope</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="it">it</span>. <span word="RSVP">RSVP</span> <span word="before">before</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="next">next</span> <span word="Wednesday">Wednesday</span>.</p><p> <span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="sincerely">sincerely</span>,</p><p> <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span></p><p> 考研英语作文批改点评如下：</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Miss">Miss</span> <span word="Yuan">Yuan</span>,</p><p> <span word="There">There</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="celebrity">celebrity</span>(改为<span word="celebration">celebration</span>) <span word="party">party</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="year">year</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="activity">activity</span> <span word="room">room</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="next">next</span> <span word="Saturday">Saturday</span>. <span word="We">We</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="honored">honored</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="us">us</span>.</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="occasion">occasion</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="start">start</span> <span word="at">at</span> 6 <span word="oclock">oclock</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="evening">evening</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="followed">followed</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="serious">serious</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="wonderful">wonderful</span> <span word="performances">performances</span> <span word="played">played</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="classmates">classmates</span>. <span word="At">At</span> <span word="around">around</span> 8 <span word="oclock">oclock</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="project">project</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="interaction">interaction</span> <span word="activities">activities</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="animate">animate</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="atmosphere">atmosphere</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="promote">promote</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="relationships">relationships</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="classmates">classmates</span>. <span word="Whats">Whats</span> <span word="more">more</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="prepared">prepared</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="gifts">gifts</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="presented">presented</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="winners">winners</span>.</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="really">really</span> <span word="hope">hope</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="it">it</span>. <span word="RSVP">RSVP</span> <span word="before">before</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="next">next</span> <span word="Wednesday">Wednesday</span>.</p>
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