考研英语小作文批改投诉信5-7分例文4
<p> 考研英语待批改作文：</p><p> 5-7分</p><p> 第四篇</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Sir">Sir</span> ，</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="customer">customer</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="store">store</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="feel">feel</span> <span word="bad">bad</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="trouble">trouble</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="afraid">afraid</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="complaint">complaint</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="box">box</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="pen">pen</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="bought">bought</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="yours">yours</span>.</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="reason">reason</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="dissatisfaction">dissatisfaction</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="quality">quality</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="pens">pens</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="bad">bad</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="place">place</span>，<span word="I">I</span> <span word="found">found</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="less">less</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="pens">pens</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="opened">opened</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="box">box</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="addition">addition</span>，<span word="a">a</span> <span word="pen">pen</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="broken">broken</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="didnt">didnt</span> <span word="work">work</span>. <span word="Under">Under</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="circumstances">circumstances</span>， <span word="I">I</span> <span word="find">find</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="store">store</span>.</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="appreciate">appreciate</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="pens">pens</span>，<span word="preferably">preferably</span> <span word="replace">replace</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="whole">whole</span> <span word="box">box</span>，<span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="matter">matter</span> <span word="settled">settled</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="day">day</span>.</p><p> <span word="Thank">Thank</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="consideration">consideration</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="looking">looking</span> <span word="forward">forward</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="reply">reply</span>.</p><p> <span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="sincerely">sincerely</span>，</p><p> <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span></p><p> 考研英语作文批改点评如下：</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Sir">Sir</span> ，</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="customer">customer</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="store">store</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="feel">feel</span> <span word="bad">bad</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="trouble">trouble</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="afraid">afraid</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="complaint">complaint</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="box">box</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="pen">pen</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="bought">bought</span> <span word="it">it</span>(删除)<span word="from">from</span> <span word="yours">yours</span>.</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="reason">reason</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="dissatisfaction">dissatisfaction</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="quality">quality</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="pens">pens</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="bad">bad</span>(删除). <span word="In">In</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="place">place</span>，<span word="I">I</span> <span word="found">found</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="less">less</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="pens">pens</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="opened">opened</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="box">box</span>(不用<span word="there">there</span> <span word="be">be</span> 句型，可改为<span word="I">I</span> <span word="found">found</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="box">box</span> <span word="lacked">lacked</span> <span word="of">of</span> 2 <span word="pens">pens</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="opened">opened</span> <span word="it">it</span>). <span word="In">In</span> <span word="addition">addition</span>，<span word="a">a</span> <span word="pen">pen</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="broken">broken</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="didnt">didnt</span> <span word="work">work</span>. <span word="Under">Under</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="circumstances">circumstances</span>， <span word="I">I</span> <span word="find">find</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="store">store</span>.</p>
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