英语六级5分作文范文批改2
<p> 英语六级待批改作文：</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="cellphone">cellphone</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="common">common</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="daily">daily</span> <span word="life">life</span>, <span word="you">you</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="hardly">hardly</span> <span word="imagine">imagine</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="few">few</span> <span word="years">years</span> <span word="ago">ago</span>, <span word="cellphone">cellphone</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="previlege">previlege</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="little">little</span> <span word="people">people</span>. <span word="In">In</span> 1999, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="number">number</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="cellphone">cellphone</span> <span word="users">users</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="just">just</span> 200, <span word="then">then</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="came">came</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="about">about</span> 500 <span word="in">in</span> 2002. <span word="In">In</span> 2005, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="data">data</span> <span word="sharply">sharply</span> <span word="increased">increased</span> <span word="to">to</span> 900.</p><p> <span word="Why">Why</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="users">users</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="cellphone">cellphone</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="quickly">quickly</span>? <span word="Initially">Initially</span>,<span word="the">the</span> <span word="primary">primary</span> <span word="reason">reason</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="income">income</span>. <span word="With">With</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="higher">higher</span> <span word="income">income</span>, <span word="people">people</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="willing">willing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="enjoy">enjoy</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="convinence">convinence</span> <span word="life">life</span>. <span word="Another">Another</span> <span word="equally">equally</span> <span word="significant">significant</span> <span word="reason">reason</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="change">change</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="decrease">decrease</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="cost">cost</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="making">making</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="cellphone">cellphone</span>. <span word="Taking">Taking</span> <span word="advantage">advantage</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="high">high</span> <span word="technology">technology</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="indurstry">indurstry</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="little">little</span> <span word="labor">labor</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="cheaper">cheaper</span> <span word="meterial">meterial</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="produce">produce</span> <span word="cellphones">cellphones</span>. <span word="All">All</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="made">made</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="price">price</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="cellphone">cellphone</span> <span word="affordable">affordable</span>.</p><p> <span word="This">This</span> <span word="phenomenon">phenomenon</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="signal">signal</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="peoples">peoples</span> <span word="life">life</span> <span word="comdition">comdition</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="spread">spread</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="high">high</span> <span word="technology">technology</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="really">really</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="thing">thing</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="society">society</span>. <span word="There">There</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="doubt">doubt</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="future">future</span>, <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="continuesly">continuesly</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="economy">economy</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="technology">technology</span>, <span word="more">more</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="cellphone">cellphone</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="enjoy">enjoy</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="convinence">convinence</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="it">it</span>.</p><p> 英语六级作文批改如下： </p><p> <span word="Thecellphone">Thecellphone</span>（这不是一个词，加空格）<span word="is">is</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="common">common</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="daily">daily</span> <span word="life">life</span>, <span word="you">you</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="hardly">hardly</span> <span word="imagine">imagine</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="few">few</span> <span word="years">years</span> <span word="ago">ago</span>, <span word="cellphone">cellphone</span> <span word="istheprevilege">istheprevilege</span>（拼写错误，改为<span word="privilege">privilege</span>）<span word="forlittle">forlittle</span> <span word="people">people</span>（改为<span word="a">a</span> <span word="few">few</span> <span word="people">people</span>）. <span word="In">In</span> 1999, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="number">number</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="cellphone">cellphone</span> <span word="usersarejust">usersarejust</span> 200, <span word="then">then</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="came">came</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="about">about</span> 500 <span word="in">in</span> 2002. <span word="In">In</span> 2005, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="data">data</span> <span word="sharply">sharply</span> <span word="increased">increased</span> <span word="to">to</span> 900.</p>
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