英语六级5分作文范文批改1
<p> 英语六级待批改作文：</p><p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="chat">chat</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="learn">learn</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="cell">cell</span> <span word="phone">phone</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="increasing">increasing</span> <span word="speedy">speedy</span>. <span word="Compared">Compared</span> <span word="with">with</span> 1999, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="twice">twice</span> <span word="in">in</span> 2002.<span word="And">And</span> 2005 <span word="compare">compare</span> <span word="with">with</span> 2002 <span word="is">is</span> <span word="twice">twice</span> <span word="times">times</span>. <span word="We">We</span> <span word="pay">pay</span> <span word="attention">attention</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="electronic">electronic</span> <span word="technology">technology</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="used">used</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="cell">cell</span> <span word="phone">phone</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="makes">makes</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="function">function</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="surfing">surfing</span> <span word="Internet">Internet</span>, <span word="taking">taking</span> <span word="photos">photos</span>, <span word="playing">playing</span> <span word="games">games</span>, <span word="handling">handling</span> <span word="works">works</span>, <span word="storing">storing</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="files">files</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="cell">cell</span> <span word="phones">phones</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="makes">makes</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="life">life</span> <span word="convenient">convenient</span>. <span word="When">When</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="kind">kind</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="technology">technology</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="produced">produced</span> <span word="largely">largely</span>, <span word="its">its</span> <span word="cost">cost</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="reduced">reduced</span>. <span word="So">So</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="always">always</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="advanced">advanced</span> <span word="cell">cell</span> <span word="phones">phones</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="suitable">suitable</span> <span word="price">price</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="opinion">opinion</span>, <span word="so">so</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="electronic">electronic</span> <span word="equipment">equipment</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="everyday">everyday</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="changed">changed</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="terminal">terminal</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="dont">dont</span> <span word="know">know</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="call">call</span> <span word="it">it</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="current">current</span> <span word="functions">functions</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="cant">cant</span> <span word="image">image</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="functions">functions</span>.</p><p> 作文批改如下：</p><p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="thischat">thischat</span>（改为<span word="chart">chart</span>）, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="learn">learn</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="thatpeopleusecell">thatpeopleusecell</span> <span word="phoneisincreasingspeedy">phoneisincreasingspeedy</span>（改为<span word="rapidly">rapidly</span>）. <span word="Compared">Compared</span> <span word="with">with</span> 1999, <span word="itismore">itismore</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="twice">twice</span> <span word="in">in</span> 2002.<span word="And">And</span> 2005 <span word="compare">compare</span> <span word="with">with</span> 2002 <span word="is">is</span> <span word="twice">twice</span> <span word="times">times</span>. <span word="We">We</span> <span word="pay">pay</span> <span word="attention">attention</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="electronic">electronic</span> <span word="technology">technology</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="used">used</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="cell">cell</span> <span word="phone">phone</span>. <span word="Itmakes">Itmakes</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="function">function</span>（<span word="make">make</span> <span word="do">do</span>是个固定搭配）<span word="like">like</span> <span word="surfing">surfing</span> <span word="Internet">Internet</span>, <span word="taking">taking</span> <span word="photos">photos</span>, <span word="playing">playing</span> <span word="games">games</span>, <span word="handling">handling</span> <span word="works">works</span>, <span word="storing">storing</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="files">files</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="cell">cell</span> <span word="phones">phones</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="makes">makes</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="life">life</span> <span word="convenient">convenient</span>. <span word="When">When</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="kind">kind</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="technology">technology</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="produced">produced</span> <span word="largely">largely</span>, <span word="its">its</span> <span word="cost">cost</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="reduced">reduced</span>. <span word="So">So</span>, <span word="wealways">wealways</span> <span word="can">can</span>（改为<span word="can">can</span> <span word="always">always</span>）<span word="use">use</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="advanced">advanced</span> <span word="cell">cell</span> <span word="phones">phones</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="suitable">suitable</span> <span word="price">price</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="opinion">opinion</span>, <span word="so">so</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="electronic">electronic</span> <span word="equipment">equipment</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="every">every</span> <span word="day">day</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="changed">changed</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="terminal">terminal</span>,｛<span word="I">I</span> <span word="dont">dont</span> <span word="know">know</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="call">call</span> <span word="it">it</span>｝, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="current">current</span> <span word="functions">functions</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="cant">cant</span> <span word="image">image</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="functions">functions</span>.（不能理解你的意思）</p>
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