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<p> 养宠物 有些人认为养宠物很好</p><p> 有些人认为养宠物不好</p><p> 你的观点是什么?</p><p> 本文共分三段。</p><p> 第一段(34句话)</p><p> 第一句话：提出主题</p><p> 比如：</p><p> 1.<span word="Recently">Recently</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="development">development</span> /<span word="advance">advance</span>/<span word="progress">progress</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="science">science</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="technology">technology</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="phenomenon">phenomenon</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="pets">pets</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="aroused">aroused</span> <span word="wide">wide</span> <span word="concern">concern</span>.</p><p> 2.<span word="Nowadays">Nowadays</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="undeniable">undeniable</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="pets">pets</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="almost">almost</span> <span word="become">become</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="biggest">biggest</span> <span word="concern">concern</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="present">present</span>-<span word="day">day</span> <span word="world">world</span>.</p><p> 第二句话：翻译第一个提纲</p><p> 比如：<span word="a">a</span> <span word="part">part</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="citizens">citizens</span> <span word="cling">cling</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="idea">idea</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="keeping">keeping</span> <span word="pets">pets</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="beneficial">beneficial</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="daily">daily</span> <span word="life">life</span>.</p><p> 第三第四句话具体说明原委，为什么养宠物好</p><p> 比如：</p><p> 1.<span word="first">first</span>, <span word="keeping">keeping</span> <span word="pets">pets</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="reduce">reduce</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="loneliness">loneliness</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="people">people</span> ,<span word="especially">especially</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="old">old</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="children">children</span>, <span word="who">who</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="stay">stay</span> <span word="alone">alone</span>.</p><p> 2.<span word="in">in</span> <span word="addition">addition</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="pets">pets</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="lovely">lovely</span>, <span word="they">they</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="feel">feel</span> <span word="delighted">delighted</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="go">go</span> <span word="back">back</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="home">home</span>.</p><p> 第二段(34句话)</p><p> 第一句话：过度语</p><p> 比如：<span word="although">although</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="former">former</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="reasonable">reasonable</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="people">people</span>, <span word="there">there</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="still">still</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="claim">claim</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="having">having</span> <span word="animals">animals</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="home">home</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="unacceptable">unacceptable</span>.</p><p> 第二句话：翻译第二个提纲</p><p> 比如：<span word="they">they</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="opinion">opinion</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="keeping">keeping</span> <span word="pets">pets</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="banned">banned</span>.</p>
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