2014年6月四级翻译解析弱化词汇强化语法
<p> 本次四级考试已经结束，在线四六级辅导团队第一时间对真题做了解析，在线四六级名师董仲蠡认为主观题难度较大，而客观题相对保守，考试内容出乎意料，但是核心原则都是要透过现象看本质。以下为董仲蠡老师对此次翻译的点评：</p><p> 翻译出的题最让人意外，都没有涉及到中国的历史和文化。但是语法点都是相通的。在以后的翻译和写作中不要过分依赖于主题，而是抓住语法点。</p><p> 一、翻译一，经济发展问题核能</p><p> 题：中国应进一步发展核能，因为其核电目前只占其发电量的2%。该比例在所有核国家中居第30位，几乎是最低的。</p><p> <span word="China">China</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="deepen">deepen</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="development">development</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="utilization">utilization</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="nuclear">nuclear</span> <span word="energy">energy</span>, <span word="because">because</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="holds">holds</span> <span word="only">only</span> 2 <span word="percent">percent</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="total">total</span> <span word="electric">electric</span> <span word="enegy">enegy</span> <span word="production">production</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="ranked">ranked</span> <span word="the">the</span> 30<span word="th">th</span> , <span word="almost">almost</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="last">last</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="countries">countries</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="unclear">unclear</span> <span word="development">development</span>.</p><p> 这个句子精准，但得分不分特别的高。因为这个句子逗号后面加<span word="and">and</span>就是个土鳖，我们讲过逗号后面是不能加<span word="and">and</span>的。该比例讲的是这个比例的意思</p><p> 因此，我们可以做以下修改：</p><p> <span word="China">China</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="deepen">deepen</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="development">development</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="utilization">utilization</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="nuclear">nuclear</span> <span word="energy">energy</span>, <span word="because">because</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="holds">holds</span> <span word="only">only</span> 2 <span word="percent">percent</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="total">total</span> <span word="electric">electric</span> <span word="energy">energy</span> <span word="production">production</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="ranked">ranked</span> <span word="the">the</span> 30<span word="th">th</span> , <span word="almost">almost</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="last">last</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="countries">countries</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="unclear">unclear</span> <span word="development">development</span>.</p>
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