长短句的主题句
<p> 一、短句放在段首或者段末，可以揭示主题：</p><p> <span word="As">As</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="creature">creature</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="eat">eat</span>; <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="man">man</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="read">read</span>. <span word="Although">Although</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="action">action</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="meet">meet</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="primary">primary</span> <span word="need">need</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="body">body</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="satisfy">satisfy</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="intellectual">intellectual</span> <span word="need">need</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="mind">mind</span>, <span word="they">they</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="quite">quite</span> <span word="similar">similar</span>.</p><p> 强烈建议：在文章第一段用一长一短开头;在文章主体部分，要先用一个短句介绍主要意思，然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式;文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。</p><p> 二、 主题句原则</p><p> 三、 一 二 三原则</p><p> 1)<span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="place">place</span>, <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="second">second</span> <span word="place">place</span>, <span word="lastly">lastly</span></p><p> 2)<span word="to">to</span> <span word="begin">begin</span> <span word="with">with</span>, <span word="furthermore">furthermore</span>, <span word="finally">finally</span></p><p> 3)<span word="to">to</span> <span word="start">start</span> <span word="with">with</span>, <span word="in">in</span> <span word="addition">addition</span>, <span word="finally">finally</span></p><p> 4)<span word="first">first</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="foremost">foremost</span>, <span word="besides">besides</span>, <span word="last">last</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="least">least</span></p><p> 5)<span word="for">for</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="thing">thing</span>, <span word="for">for</span> <span word="another">another</span> <span word="thing">thing</span></p><p> 四、 短语优先原则</p><p> 两个好处：其一、用短语会使文章增加亮点;其二、凑字数</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="cannot">cannot</span> <span word="bear">bear</span> <span word="it">it</span>.可以用短语表达：<span word="I">I</span> <span word="cannot">cannot</span> <span word="put">put</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="it">it</span>.</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="want">want</span> <span word="it">it</span>.可以用短语表达：<span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="looking">looking</span> <span word="forward">forward</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="it">it</span>.</p><p> 五、 多实少虚原则</p><p> 一定要多用实词，少用虚词。<span word="good">good</span>, <span word="nice">nice</span>空洞，<span word="generous">generous</span>, <span word="humorous">humorous</span>, <span word="smart">smart</span>, <span word="gentle">gentle</span>, <span word="warm">warm</span>-<span word="hearted">hearted</span>, <span word="hospitable">hospitable</span>形象。再比如：走出房间空洞的词是：<span word="walk">walk</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="room">room</span></p>
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