英语四六级写作常见错误分析
<p> 1.审题不清，经常出现偏题或跑题的现象。</p><p> 2.习惯汉语思维，逐字翻译。</p><p> 3.用词搭配不当，张冠李戴。</p><p> 4.词汇量小，词不达意，拼写错误严重。</p><p> 5.句子逻辑关系混乱。</p><p> 6.不善于使用关联词，句子之间的连贯性较差。</p><p> 具体而言，学生习作中常见的错误有：</p><p> 指代方面的错误</p><p> 在使用代词<span word="it">it</span>，<span word="he">he</span>，<span word="this">this</span>，<span word="that">that</span>，<span word="which">which</span>，<span word="one">one</span>等时，前文中应出现明确的先行词。如：<span word="Since">Since</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="cannot">cannot</span> <span word="know">know</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="particular">particular</span> <span word="bit">bit</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="knowledge">knowledge</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="child">child</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="need">need</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="future">future</span>，<span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="senseless">senseless</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="force">force</span> <span word="him">him</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="learn">learn</span> <span word="it">it</span>.，这句话中，<span word="him">him</span>和<span word="it">it</span>这两个代词都有明确的先行词，分别是<span word="a">a</span> <span word="child">child</span>和<span word="knowledge">knowledge</span>，因此句子的含义非常清楚。可是，不少学生在使用这些代词时，虽然自己很清楚它们指代的是什么，但在作文中却没有交代清楚，结果这些代词非但没有使行文简洁，反而造成了意思上的模糊，让阅卷老师不知所云。</p><p> <span word="Sometimes">Sometimes</span> <span word="teachers">teachers</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="inform">inform</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="heavy">heavy</span> <span word="burden">burden</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="bear">bear</span>.</p><p> <span word="Sometimes">Sometimes</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="teacher">teacher</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="inform">inform</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="heavy">heavy</span> <span word="burden">burden</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="bear">bear</span>.</p><p> 【说明】句1中的<span word="they">they</span>既可指教师，也可指学生，属指代不清的。可以把它们中的任意一个改成单数名词。因为单数名词也可以泛指一类。</p>
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