SAT写作法则及实例：在文章中使用借词
<p> 在文章中使用借词</p><p> 在文章的写作中，少运用一些<span word="general">general</span> <span word="words">words</span>,反而多增加<span word="specific">specific</span> <span word="images">images</span>. 什么是<span word="general">general</span> <span word="words">words</span>和<span word="specific">specific</span> <span word="images">images</span>那，例如说; <span word="car">car</span> 就是<span word="general">general</span> <span word="words">words</span>,因为车的种类有很多。 而<span word="Benz">Benz</span> <span word="SUV">SUV</span> 就是<span word="specific">specific</span> <span word="images">images</span>。 在考试的时候，多使用<span word="specific">specific</span> <span word="words">words</span>可以帮助把物体解释的更清楚。读者也会获得更多的信息，使他们对你的文章更方便了解。</p><p> 下面，让我们通过几个例子来证明;</p><p> 例1;<span word="General">General</span>: <span word="Tom">Tom</span> <span word="got">got</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="car">car</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="drove">drove</span> <span word="off">off</span>.</p><p> <span word="Specific">Specific</span>: <span word="Tom">Tom</span> <span word="leaped">leaped</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="SUV">SUV</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="roared">roared</span> <span word="off">off</span>.</p><p> 例2;<span word="General">General</span>: <span word="The">The</span> <span word="writer">writer</span> <span word="wrote">wrote</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="three">three</span>-<span word="page">page</span> <span word="critique">critique</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="painting">painting</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="said">said</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="did">did</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="it">it</span>.</p><p> <span word="Specific">Specific</span>: <span word="In">In</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="three">three</span>-<span word="page">page</span> <span word="critique">critique</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="art">art</span> <span word="critic">critic</span> <span word="squeezed">squeezed</span> <span word="every">every</span> <span word="drop">drop</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="meaning">meaning</span>- <span word="and">and</span> <span word="enjoyment">enjoyment</span>- <span word="out">out</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> 3-<span word="inch">inch</span> <span word="by">by</span> 3-<span word="inch">inch</span> <span word="pastel">pastel</span>.</p><p> <span word="General">General</span> <span word="words">words</span> 对人物，地点，和事物的介绍都无法给读者准备的信息，所以为了更清楚的说明，把这些名词都应该换成<span word="specific">specific</span> <span word="words">words</span>.</p><p> 例3;<span word="General">General</span>: <span word="An">An</span> <span word="old">old</span> <span word="dog">dog</span> <span word="came">came</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="street">street</span>.</p><p> <span word="Specific">Specific</span>: <span word="An">An</span> <span word="ancient">ancient</span>, <span word="gray">gray</span>-<span word="muzzled">muzzled</span> <span word="golden">golden</span> <span word="retriever">retriever</span> <span word="wandered">wandered</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="Bluebird">Bluebird</span> <span word="Canyon">Canyon</span> <span word="Road">Road</span>.</p><p> 例4;<span word="General">General</span>: <span word="My">My</span> <span word="coach">coach</span> <span word="illustrates">illustrates</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="point">point</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="playing">playing</span> <span word="fairly">fairly</span>.</p><p> <span word="Specific">Specific</span>: <span word="My">My</span> <span word="basketball">basketball</span> <span word="coach">coach</span>, <span word="Ms">Ms</span> <span word="Berry">Berry</span>, <span word="illustrates">illustrates</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="essay">essay</span>- <span word="ists">ists</span> <span word="point">point</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="playing">playing</span> <span word="fairly">fairly</span>.</p>
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