怎样写出SAT满分作文(二)
<p> <span word="SAT">SAT</span>满分作文范例：<span word="http">http</span>://<span word="sat">sat</span>.<span word="tiandaoedu">tiandaoedu</span>.<span word="com">com</span>/<span word="write">write</span>/29889.<span word="html">html</span></p><p> 在上面这篇文章里(<span word="OG">OG</span> 6分)我们可以很清楚的看出作者犯了一个错误：<span word="To">To</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="detriment">detriment</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="thought">thought</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="idea">idea</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="watch">watch</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="movie">movie</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="order">order</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="prepare">prepare</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="hours">hours</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="studied">studied</span> <span word="Elizabeth">Elizabeth</span> <span word="Taylors">Taylors</span> <span word="mannerisms">mannerisms</span>， <span word="attitude">attitude</span>， <span word="and">and</span> <span word="diction">diction</span>， <span word="hoping">hoping</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="mimic">mimic</span> <span word="her">her</span> <span word="performance">performance</span>。她以为只要能够维妙维肖的模仿伊丽莎白 泰勒就可以得到那个脚色，出乎意料的是，导演竟然看穿了她，批评了她。最重要的是给了她一个很好意见：要演出自己的<span word="Maggie">Maggie</span>而不是泰勒的。</p><p> 第二段转过来，作者好好吸取了失败的教训，在<span word="finalperformance">finalperformance</span>中按照自己理解的方式去揣摩角色，给她赋予了新的生命( <span word="In">In</span> <span word="order">order</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="develop">develop</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="character">character</span>， <span word="I">I</span> <span word="planned">planned</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="her">her</span> <span word="life">life</span> <span word="just">just</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="thought">thought</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="be">be</span>， <span word="gave">gave</span> <span word="her">her</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="voice">voice</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="thought">thought</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="right">right</span>， <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="rest">rest</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="her">her</span> <span word="character">character</span> <span word="unfolded">unfolded</span> <span word="beautifully">beautifully</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="there">there</span>.) 用作者的话说这个角色就慢慢地展现在她面前。而最终的结果，可想而知，作者得到了前所未有的好评： <span word="My">My</span> <span word="director">director</span> <span word="told">told</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="after">after</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="show">show</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="Rumors">Rumors</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="best">best</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="hed">hed</span> <span word="ever">ever</span> <span word="seen">seen</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="me">me</span>， <span word="and">and</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="amazed">amazed</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="Id">Id</span> <span word="developed">developed</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="believable">believable</span> <span word="character">character</span>.本来故事到这里应该结束了，可是作者继续升华，感谢自己之前犯下的错误，因为没有那个错误，就没有最终的成功。</p>
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