2014年10月SAT考试真题之写作范文
<p> 这位同学的思路清晰，内容充实，选取的观点同大部分同学不一样。觉得我们应该坚持自己的态度。</p><p> 开头段</p><p> 1 观点<span word="While">While</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="reasonably">reasonably</span> <span word="natural">natural</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="adaptation">adaptation</span> <span word="makes">makes</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="flexible">flexible</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="easier">easier</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="fit">fit</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="environment">environment</span>, <span word="sometimes">sometimes</span> <span word="staying">staying</span> <span word="unchanged">unchanged</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="achieve">achieve</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="goal">goal</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="life">life</span>.</p><p> 2 解释原因 <span word="In">In</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="cases">cases</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="better">better</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="stick">stick</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="ones">ones</span> <span word="original">original</span> <span word="goal">goal</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="hold">hold</span> <span word="on">on</span>.</p><p> 不改变态度，坚持自己的目标，更有可以完成自己的理想。</p><p> 3 结构提示 <span word="The">The</span> <span word="example">example</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Rachel">Rachel</span> <span word="Carson">Carson</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="illustrates">illustrates</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="point">point</span>.</p><p> 中间段</p><p> 提示：这位同学介绍的主人公<span word="Rachel">Rachel</span> <span word="Carson">Carson</span>是美国生物学家和科学读物作家，1962年发表预言性著作《寂静的春天》，提醒世界注意农药在食物链中所起的破坏作用，被认为是环保运动史上有重大影响的著作。</p><p> 这个人物的素材是她自己之前就准备过的，十分新颖。同时对于考官来说，一位美国作家的故事无疑较为亲切。</p><p> 例子的题眼是：新环境坚持自己的态度成功</p><p> <span word="Carsons">Carsons</span> <span word="mother">mother</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="naturalist">naturalist</span> <span word="herself">herself</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="bequeathed">bequeathed</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="little">little</span> <span word="Carson">Carson</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="life">life</span>-<span word="long">long</span> <span word="love">love</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="nature">nature</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="living">living</span> <span word="creatures">creatures</span>. <span word="Carson">Carson</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="deeply">deeply</span> <span word="influenced">influenced</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="her">her</span> <span word="mother">mother</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="determined">determined</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="dedicate">dedicate</span> <span word="her">her</span> <span word="life">life</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="cause">cause</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="studying">studying</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="protecting">protecting</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="natural">natural</span> <span word="world">world</span>.</p>
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