2014年10月9日SAT写作参考范文一
<p> 10月9日<span word="SAT">SAT</span>作文成文</p><p> 开头段：三句话写作法</p><p> 1 观点</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="prefer">prefer</span> <span word="adjusting">adjusting</span> <span word="ourselves">ourselves</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="circumstances">circumstances</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="remaining">remaining</span> <span word="unchanged">unchanged</span>.</p><p> 2 解释观点=提炼例子中的为什么</p><p> <span word="On">On</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="occasions">occasions</span>, <span word="you">you</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="change">change</span> <span word="yourself">yourself</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="circumstances">circumstances</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="cancer">cancer</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="still">still</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="dream">dream</span> <span word="yet">yet</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="realized">realized</span>.</p><p> <span word="On">On</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="contrary">contrary</span>, <span word="if">if</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="refuse">refuse</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="gear">gear</span> <span word="yourself">yourself</span> <span word="towards">towards</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="circumstances">circumstances</span>, <span word="hardly">hardly</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="survive">survive</span>, <span word="let">let</span> <span word="alone">alone</span> <span word="realizing">realizing</span> <span word="dreams">dreams</span>.</p><p> 3 下文的结构提示</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="story">story</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Lance">Lance</span> <span word="Armstrong">Armstrong</span>, <span word="an">an</span> <span word="American">American</span> <span word="cyclist">cyclist</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="overcame">overcame</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="deadly">deadly</span> <span word="cancer">cancer</span>, <span word="could">could</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="exemplify">exemplify</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="point">point</span>.</p><p> 中间段</p><p> 目的：把已经准备好的逻辑链条变成英文，注意两点</p><p> 1) 细节</p><p> 2) 适时点题</p><p> 第一步：曾经的他</p><p> <span word="Raised">Raised</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="single">single</span>-<span word="parent">parent</span> <span word="family">family</span>, <span word="Lance">Lance</span> <span word="Armstrong">Armstrong</span> <span word="lived">lived</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="mother">mother</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="over">over</span> 19 <span word="years">years</span> <span word="until">until</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="found">found</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="talent">talent</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="cycling">cycling</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="decided">decided</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="move">move</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="own">own</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="join">join</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="American">American</span> <span word="national">national</span> <span word="cycling">cycling</span> <span word="team">team</span> <span word="under">under</span> <span word="coach">coach</span> <span word="Chris">Chris</span> <span word="Carmichael">Carmichael</span>. <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="he">he</span> <span word="exhibited">exhibited</span> <span word="somewhat">somewhat</span> <span word="traits">traits</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="teenager">teenager</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="lacked">lacked</span> <span word="parental">parental</span> <span word="love">love</span>, <span word="such">such</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="rudeness">rudeness</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="egoism">egoism</span>.</p><p> <span word="To">To</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="specific">specific</span>, <span word="in">in</span> 1990 <span word="Amateur">Amateur</span> <span word="World">World</span> <span word="Championship">Championship</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="Japan">Japan</span>, <span word="he">he</span> <span word="ignored">ignored</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="suggestion">suggestion</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="coach">coach</span> <span word="Chris">Chris</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="supposed">supposed</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="save">save</span> <span word="energy">energy</span> <span word="before">before</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="final">final</span> <span word="charge">charge</span>. <span word="Actually">Actually</span>, <span word="at">at</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="time">time</span>, <span word="he">he</span> <span word="quickly">quickly</span> <span word="pedaled">pedaled</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="big">big</span> <span word="lead">lead</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="order">order</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="show">show</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="before">before</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="competitors">competitors</span>. <span word="However">However</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="charge">charge</span> <span word="consumed">consumed</span> <span word="him">him</span> <span word="too">too</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="energy">energy</span>. <span word="Finally">Finally</span>, <span word="he">he</span> <span word="finished">finished</span> <span word="eleventh">eleventh</span>.</p>
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