GMAT写作范文点评分析
<p> <span word="GMAT">GMAT</span>考试准备的时候我们要重点关注作文部分，能写出一篇不错的<span word="GMAT">GMAT</span>作文是非常不易的。写作文要有不错的英语基础和写作技巧，小编这里给大家分享的是<span word="GMAT">GMAT</span>写作的范文点评：</p><p> 原题：</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="appeared">appeared</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="part">part</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="annual">annual</span> <span word="report">report</span> <span word="sent">sent</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="stockholders">stockholders</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="Olympic">Olympic</span> <span word="Foods">Foods</span>, <span word="a">a</span> <span word="processor">processor</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="frozen">frozen</span> <span word="foods">foods</span>:</p><p> <span word="Over">Over</span> <span word="time">time</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="costs">costs</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="processing">processing</span> <span word="go">go</span> <span word="down">down</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="organizations">organizations</span> <span word="learn">learn</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="things">things</span> <span word="better">better</span>, <span word="they">they</span> <span word="become">become</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="efficient">efficient</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="color">color</span> <span word="film">film</span> <span word="processing">processing</span>, <span word="for">for</span> <span word="example">example</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="cost">cost</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> 3-<span word="by">by</span>-5-<span word="inch">inch</span> <span word="print">print</span> <span word="fell">fell</span> <span word="from">from</span> 50 <span word="cents">cents</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="five">five</span>-<span word="day">day</span> <span word="service">service</span> <span word="in">in</span> 1970 <span word="to">to</span> 20 <span word="cents">cents</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="one">one</span>-<span word="day">day</span> <span word="service">service</span> <span word="in">in</span> 1984. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="same">same</span> <span word="principle">principle</span> <span word="applies">applies</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="processing">processing</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="food">food</span>. <span word="And">And</span> <span word="since">since</span> <span word="Olympic">Olympic</span> <span word="Foods">Foods</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="soon">soon</span> <span word="celebrate">celebrate</span> <span word="its">its</span> 25<span word="th">th</span> <span word="birthday">birthday</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="expect">expect</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="long">long</span> <span word="experience">experience</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="enable">enable</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="minimize">minimize</span> <span word="costs">costs</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="thus">thus</span> <span word="maximize">maximize</span> <span word="profits">profits</span>.</p><p> 逻辑漏洞：</p><p> 1. <span word="false">false</span> <span word="analogy">analogy</span>: <span word="The">The</span> <span word="food">food</span> <span word="industry">industry</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="analogous">analogous</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="color">color</span> <span word="film">film</span> <span word="industry">industry</span>.</p><p> 2.<span word="causal">causal</span> <span word="oversimplification">oversimplification</span>: <span word="Other">Other</span> <span word="factors">factors</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="contribute">contribute</span> <span word="t">t</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="cost">cost</span> <span word="decline">decline</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="printing">printing</span> <span word="cost">cost</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="considered">considered</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="ruled">ruled</span> <span word="out">out</span>.</p><p> 3.<span word="gratuitous">gratuitous</span> <span word="assumption">assumption</span>: <span word="The">The</span> <span word="conclusion">conclusion</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="based">based</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="gratuitous">gratuitous</span> <span word="assumption">assumption</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="company">company</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="minimize">minimize</span> <span word="cost">cost</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="maximize">maximize</span> <span word="profit">profit</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="company">company</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="conducted">conducted</span> <span word="for">for</span> 25 <span word="years">years</span>.</p><p> 范文：</p>
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