GMAT考试写作例文224篇连载(一零七)
<p> 107. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="appeared">appeared</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="memorandum">memorandum</span> <span word="written">written</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="assistant">assistant</span> <span word="manager">manager</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="store">store</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="sells">sells</span> <span word="gourmet">gourmet</span> <span word="food">food</span> <span word="items">items</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="various">various</span> <span word="countries">countries</span>.</p><p> <span word="A">A</span> <span word="local">local</span> <span word="wine">wine</span> <span word="store">store</span> <span word="made">made</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="interesting">interesting</span> <span word="discovery">discovery</span> <span word="last">last</span> <span word="month">month</span>: <span word="it">it</span> <span word="sold">sold</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="French">French</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="Italian">Italian</span> <span word="wine">wine</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="days">days</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="played">played</span> <span word="recordings">recordings</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="French">French</span> <span word="accordion">accordion</span> <span word="music">music</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="sold">sold</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="Italian">Italian</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="French">French</span> <span word="wine">wine</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="days">days</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="Italian">Italian</span> <span word="songs">songs</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="played">played</span>. <span word="Therefore">Therefore</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="recommend">recommend</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="put">put</span> <span word="food">food</span> <span word="specialties">specialties</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="particular">particular</span> <span word="country">country</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="sale">sale</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="week">week</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="play">play</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="music">music</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="country">country</span> <span word="while">while</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="sale">sale</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="going">going</span> <span word="on">on</span>. <span word="By">By</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="means">means</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="profits">profits</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="same">same</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="wine">wine</span> <span word="store">store</span> <span word="did">did</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="able">able</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="predict">predict</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="precisely">precisely</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="items">items</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="stock">stock</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="any">any</span> <span word="given">given</span> <span word="time">time</span>.</p><p> <span word="Discuss">Discuss</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="reasoned">reasoned</span> . . . <span word="etc">etc</span>.</p><p> <span word="As">As</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="means">means</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="increasing">increasing</span> <span word="profits">profits</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="accurately">accurately</span> <span word="predicting">predicting</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="items">items</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="stocked">stocked</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="assistant">assistant</span> <span word="manager">manager</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="gourmet">gourmet</span> <span word="food">food</span> <span word="store">store</span> <span word="proposes">proposes</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="music">music</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="particular">particular</span> <span word="country">country</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="played">played</span> <span word="during">during</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="period">period</span> <span word="food">food</span> <span word="items">items</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="country">country</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="sale">sale</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="basis">basis</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="proposal">proposal</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="discovery">discovery</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="wine">wine</span> <span word="store">store</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="sales">sales</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="wine">wine</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="country">country</span> <span word="increased">increased</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="music">music</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="country">country</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="played">played</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="managers">managers</span> <span word="proposal">proposal</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="questionable">questionable</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="several">several</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span>.</p><p> <span word="First">First</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="manager">manager</span> <span word="assumes">assumes</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="sequence">sequence</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="sales">sales</span> <span word="experienced">experienced</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="wine">wine</span> <span word="store">store</span> <span word="reflects">reflects</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="general">general</span> <span word="causal">causal</span> <span word="pattern">pattern</span>. <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="there">there</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="little">little</span> <span word="evidence">evidence</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="support">support</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="assumption">assumption</span>. <span word="While">While</span> <span word="perhaps">perhaps</span> <span word="indicative">indicative</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="pattern">pattern</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="wine">wine</span> <span word="store">store</span> <span word="sales">sales</span> <span word="merely">merely</span> <span word="demonstrate">demonstrate</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="correlation">correlation</span> <span word="between">between</span> <span word="sales">sales</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="wine">wine</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="country">country</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="playing">playing</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="music">music</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="country">country</span>. <span word="To">To</span> <span word="establish">establish</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="causal">causal</span> <span word="connection">connection</span> <span word="between">between</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="events">events</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="necessary">necessary</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="examine">examine</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="eliminate">eliminate</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="possible">possible</span> <span word="factors">factors</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="might">might</span> <span word="account">account</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="phenomenon">phenomenon</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="any">any</span> <span word="case">case</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="highly">highly</span> <span word="questionable">questionable</span> <span word="whether">whether</span> <span word="evidence">evidence</span> <span word="gathered">gathered</span> <span word="over">over</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="one">one</span>-<span word="month">month</span> <span word="period">period</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="sufficient">sufficient</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="establish">establish</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="general">general</span> <span word="claim">claim</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="question">question</span>.</p>
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