GMAT考试写作指导：Argument范文三八
<p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="concludes">concludes</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="West">West</span> <span word="Cambria">Cambria</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="revenues">revenues</span></p><p> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="provide">provide</span> <span word="better">better</span> <span word="care">care</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="accident">accident</span> <span word="victims">victims</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="disbanding">disbanding</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="volunteer">volunteer</span> <span word="ambulance">ambulance</span></p><p> <span word="service">service</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="hiring">hiring</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="commercial">commercial</span> <span word="one">one</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="change">change</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="yield">yield</span></p><p> <span word="additional">additional</span> <span word="revenues">revenues</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="service">service</span> <span word="fees">fees</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="imposed">imposed</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="ambulance">ambulance</span> <span word="use">use</span>. <span word="The">The</span></p><p> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="city">city</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="provide">provide</span> <span word="better">better</span> <span word="service">service</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="accident">accident</span> <span word="victims">victims</span></p><p> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="commercial">commercial</span> <span word="service">service</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="respond">respond</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="quickly">quickly</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="accidents">accidents</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="volunteer">volunteer</span></p><p> <span word="service">service</span> <span word="would">would</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="authors">authors</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="flawed">flawed</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="respects">respects</span>.</p><p> <span word="To">To</span> <span word="begin">begin</span> <span word="with">with</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="authors">authors</span> <span word="plan">plan</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="raising">raising</span> <span word="revenue">revenue</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="West">West</span> <span word="Cambria">Cambria</span> <span word="is">is</span></p><p> <span word="questionable">questionable</span>. <span word="Unless">Unless</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="service">service</span> <span word="fees">fees</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="considerable">considerable</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="accident">accident</span> <span word="rate">rate</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="extremely">extremely</span></p><p> <span word="high">high</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="unlikely">unlikely</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="significant">significant</span> <span word="revenues">revenues</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="raised">raised</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="charging">charging</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="fee">fee</span> <span word="for">for</span></p><p> <span word="ambulance">ambulance</span> <span word="use">use</span>. <span word="Consequently">Consequently</span>, <span word="revenue">revenue</span> <span word="generation">generation</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="reason">reason</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="disband">disband</span> <span word="the">the</span></p><p> <span word="volunteer">volunteer</span> <span word="service">service</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="hire">hire</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="commercial">commercial</span> <span word="service">service</span>.</p><p> <span word="Next">Next</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="authors">authors</span> <span word="belief">belief</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="better">better</span> <span word="patient">patient</span> <span word="care">care</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="provided">provided</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="a">a</span></p><p> <span word="commercial">commercial</span> <span word="ambulance">ambulance</span> <span word="service">service</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="volunteer">volunteer</span> <span word="service">service</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="based">based</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="insufficient">insufficient</span></p><p> <span word="evidence">evidence</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="fact">fact</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="commercial">commercial</span> <span word="service">service</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="East">East</span> <span word="Cambria">Cambria</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="lower">lower</span> <span word="average">average</span></p><p> <span word="response">response</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="volunteer">volunteer</span> <span word="service">service</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="West">West</span> <span word="Cambria">Cambria</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="insufficient">insufficient</span> <span word="evidence">evidence</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span></p>
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