GMAT考试写作指导：Argument范文三五
<p> 35. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="financial">financial</span>-<span word="planning">planning</span> <span word="office">office</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="Fern">Fern</span> <span word="Valley">Valley</span> <span word="University">University</span> <span word="concludes">concludes</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span></p><p> <span word="necessary">necessary</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="initiate">initiate</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="fund">fund</span>-<span word="raising">raising</span> <span word="campaign">campaign</span> <span word="among">among</span> <span word="alumni">alumni</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="enable">enable</span> <span word="the">the</span></p><p> <span word="university">university</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="expand">expand</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="range">range</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="subjects">subjects</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="offers">offers</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="size">size</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="library">library</span></p><p> <span word="facilities">facilities</span>. <span word="It">It</span>: <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="based">based</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="five">five</span>-<span word="year">year</span> <span word="decline">decline</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="enrollments">enrollments</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="admission">admission</span></p><p> <span word="applications">applications</span> <span word="together">together</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="claim">claim</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="cite">cite</span> <span word="poor">poor</span> <span word="teaching">teaching</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="inadequate">inadequate</span></p><p> <span word="library">library</span> <span word="resources">resources</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="chief">chief</span> <span word="sources">sources</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="dissatisfaction">dissatisfaction</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="Fern">Fern</span> <span word="Valley">Valley</span>. <span word="The">The</span></p><p> <span word="conclusion">conclusion</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="financial">financial</span>-<span word="planning">planning</span> <span word="office">office</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="strongly">strongly</span> <span word="supported">supported</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span></p><p> <span word="given">given</span>.</p><p> <span word="To">To</span> <span word="begin">begin</span> <span word="with">with</span>, <span word="this">this</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="depends">depends</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="assumption">assumption</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="providing">providing</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="greater">greater</span></p><p> <span word="range">range</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="subjects">subjects</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="larger">larger</span> <span word="library">library</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="alleviate">alleviate</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="chief">chief</span> <span word="sources">sources</span> <span word="of">of</span></p><p> <span word="dissatisfaction">dissatisfaction</span>. <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="complained">complained</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="inadequate">inadequate</span> <span word="course">course</span></p><p> <span word="offerings">offerings</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="size">size</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="library">library</span>; <span word="their">their</span> <span word="complaint">complaint</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="existing">existing</span> <span word="courses">courses</span> <span word="are">are</span></p><p> <span word="poorly">poorly</span> <span word="taught">taught</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="library">library</span> <span word="resources">resources</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="inadequate">inadequate</span>. <span word="Offering">Offering</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="kinds">kinds</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="classes">classes</span></p><p> <span word="does">does</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="improve">improve</span> <span word="teaching">teaching</span> <span word="quality">quality</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="increasing">increasing</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="librarys">librarys</span> <span word="size">size</span> <span word="does">does</span> <span word="nothing">nothing</span> <span word="to">to</span></p><p> <span word="enhance">enhance</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="holdings">holdings</span>, <span word="or">or</span> <span word="resources">resources</span>. <span word="Accordingly">Accordingly</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="recommendation">recommendation</span> <span word="does">does</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="bear">bear</span></p>
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