GMAT考试写作指导：Argument范文二
<p> 60. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="editorial">editorial</span> <span word="argues">argues</span> <span word="that">that</span>, <span word="since">since</span> <span word="career">career</span> <span word="advancement">advancement</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="scientists">scientists</span> <span word="typically">typically</span> <span word="require">require</span>:</p><p> 60 <span word="to">to</span> 80 <span word="hours">hours</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="per">per</span> <span word="week">week</span>, <span word="affordable">affordable</span> <span word="all">all</span>-<span word="day">day</span> <span word="child">child</span> <span word="care">care</span> <span word="must">must</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="made">made</span> <span word="available">available</span></p><p> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="scientists">scientists</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="both">both</span> <span word="genders">genders</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="advance">advance</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="fields">fields</span>. <span word="Moreover">Moreover</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="editorial">editorial</span></p><p> <span word="urges">urges</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="requirements">requirements</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="career">career</span> <span word="advancement">advancement</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="made">made</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="flexible">flexible</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="insure">insure</span> <span word="that">that</span></p><p> <span word="pre">pre</span>-<span word="school">school</span> <span word="children">children</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="spend">spend</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="significant">significant</span> <span word="amount">amount</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="each">each</span> <span word="day">day</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="parent">parent</span>. <span word="This">This</span></p><p> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="problematic">problematic</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="crucial">crucial</span> <span word="respects">respects</span>.</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="major">major</span> <span word="problem">problem</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="view">view</span> <span word="expressed">expressed</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="article">article</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="inconsistent">inconsistent</span></p><p> <span word="recommendations">recommendations</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="endorsed">endorsed</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="argument">argument</span>. <span word="On">On</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="hand">hand</span>, <span word="scientists">scientists</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="urged">urged</span> <span word="to">to</span></p><p> <span word="put">put</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="children">children</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="all">all</span>-<span word="day">day</span> <span word="child">child</span>-<span word="care">care</span> <span word="facilities">facilities</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="order">order</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="advance">advance</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="careers">careers</span>. <span word="On">On</span> <span word="the">the</span></p><p> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="hand">hand</span>, <span word="they">they</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="encouraged">encouraged</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="spend">spend</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="significant">significant</span> <span word="amount">amount</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="each">each</span> <span word="day">day</span> <span word="with">with</span></p><p> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="children">children</span>. <span word="Obviously">Obviously</span>, <span word="scientists">scientists</span> <span word="cannot">cannot</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="expected">expected</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="adhere">adhere</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="both">both</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="these">these</span></p><p> <span word="recommendations">recommendations</span>.</p><p> <span word="Another">Another</span> <span word="problem">problem</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="recommendations">recommendations</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="based">based</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="assumption">assumption</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="e">e</span></p><p> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="least">least</span> <span word="most">most</span>. <span word="scientists">scientists</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="young">young</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="preschool">preschool</span>-<span word="age">age</span> <span word="children">children</span>. <span word="But">But</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="editorial">editorial</span></p><p> <span word="provides">provides</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="evidence">evidence</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="support">support</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="assumption">assumption</span>, <span word="nor">nor</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="assumption">assumption</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="likely">likely</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span></p>
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