GMAT考试写作参考例文（19）
<p> <span word="GMAT">GMAT</span>考试写作参考例文</p><p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="business">business</span>, <span word="more">more</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="any">any</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="social">social</span> <span word="arena">arena</span>, <span word="men">men</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="women">women</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="learned">learned</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="share">share</span> <span word="power">power</span> <span word="effectively">effectively</span>.</p><p> <span word="Discuss">Discuss</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="extent">extent</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="agree">agree</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="disagree">disagree</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="opinion">opinion</span> <span word="stated">stated</span> <span word="above">above</span>. <span word="Support">Support</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="views">views</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span> <span word="and">and</span>/<span word="or">or</span> <span word="examples">examples</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="own">own</span> <span word="experience">experience</span>, <span word="observations">observations</span>, <span word="or">or</span> <span word="reading">reading</span>.</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="stated">stated</span> <span word="opinion">opinion</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="vague">vague</span>, <span word="with">with</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="clear">clear</span> <span word="meaning">meaning</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="sharing">sharing</span> <span word="power">power</span> <span word="effectively">effectively</span>. <span word="But">But</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="phrase">phrase</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="intended">intended</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="convey">convey</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="idea">idea</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="roughly">roughly</span> <span word="equal">equal</span> <span word="numbers">numbers</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="men">men</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="women">women</span> <span word="occupy">occupy</span> <span word="prestige">prestige</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="high">high</span>-<span word="paying">paying</span> <span word="positions">positions</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="business">business</span>, <span word="then">then</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="believe">believe</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="claim">claim</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="issue">issue</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="mistaken">mistaken</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span>.</p><p> <span word="First">First</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="all">all</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="case">case</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="women">women</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="demonstrably">demonstrably</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="successful">successful</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="attaining">attaining</span> <span word="powerful">powerful</span> <span word="positions">positions</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="business">business</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="social">social</span> <span word="arenas">arenas</span>. <span word="Admittedly">Admittedly</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="percentage">percentage</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="women">women</span> <span word="earning">earning</span> <span word="degrees">degrees</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="entering">entering</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="business">business</span> <span word="world">world</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="significantly">significantly</span> <span word="greater">greater</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="prestigious">prestigious</span> <span word="professions">professions</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="medicine">medicine</span>, <span word="engineering">engineering</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="science">science</span>. <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="ratio">ratio</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="women">women</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="graduate">graduate</span> <span word="business">business</span> <span word="programs">programs</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="business">business</span> <span word="management">management</span> <span word="positions">positions</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="same">same</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="law">law</span> <span word="schools">schools</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="firms">firms</span>, <span word="or">or</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="Ph">Ph</span>.<span word="D">D</span>. <span word="programs">programs</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="teaching">teaching</span> <span word="positions">positions</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="higher">higher</span> <span word="education">education</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="business">business</span>, <span word="law">law</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="higher">higher</span> <span word="education">education</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="proportion">proportion</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="professional">professional</span> <span word="women">women</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="around">around</span> 40 <span word="percent">percent</span>.</p><p> <span word="Secondly">Secondly</span>, <span word="very">very</span> <span word="few">few</span> <span word="women">women</span> <span word="achieve">achieve</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="highest">highest</span>-<span word="level">level</span> <span word="positions">positions</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="business">business</span>. <span word="Recent">Recent</span> <span word="studies">studies</span> <span word="indicate">indicate</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="women">women</span> <span word="occupy">occupy</span> <span word="just">just</span> <span word="under">under</span> 3 <span word="percent">percent</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="corporate">corporate</span> <span word="executive">executive</span> <span word="positions">positions</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="vice">vice</span> <span word="president">president</span> <span word="level">level</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="up">up</span>. <span word="And">And</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="importantly">importantly</span>, <span word="this">this</span> <span word="percentage">percentage</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="changed">changed</span> <span word="significantly">significantly</span> <span word="during">during</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="past">past</span> <span word="ten">ten</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="fifteen">fifteen</span> <span word="years">years</span>, <span word="a">a</span> <span word="period">period</span> <span word="during">during</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="number">number</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="women">women</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="management">management</span> <span word="careers">careers</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="record">record</span> <span word="numbers">numbers</span>, <span word="they">they</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="setting">setting</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="lower">lower</span> <span word="level">level</span> <span word="jobs">jobs</span> <span word="while">while</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="male">male</span> <span word="counterparts">counterparts</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="achieving">achieving</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="powerful">powerful</span> <span word="ones">ones</span>.</p>
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