2011年GMAT考试高分作文模板参考
<p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="argument">argument</span>，<span word="the">the</span> <span word="arguer">arguer</span> <span word="concludes">concludes</span>/<span word="claims">claims</span> <span word="that">that</span>。<span word="The">The</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="cites">cites</span>。.<span word="as">as</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="example">example</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="support">support</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="recommendation">recommendation</span>. <span word="Furthermore">Furthermore</span>， <span word="he">he</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="assume">assume</span> <span word="that">that</span>.<span word="At">At</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="glance">glance</span>， <span word="the">the</span> <span word="authors">authors</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="appears">appears</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="somewhat">somewhat</span> <span word="appealing">appealing</span>， <span word="but">but</span> <span word="thorough">thorough</span> <span word="examination">examination</span> <span word="reveals">reveals</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="problematic">problematic</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="several">several</span> <span word="critical">critical</span> <span word="flaws">flaws</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="discussed">discussed</span> <span word="below">below</span>.</p><p> <span word="Firstly">Firstly</span>， <span word="the">the</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="rests">rests</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="gratuitous">gratuitous</span> <span word="assumption">assumption</span> <span word="that">that</span>++++ <span word="However">However</span>， <span word="the">the</span> <span word="assumption">assumption</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="questionable">questionable</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="provides">provides</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="evidence">evidence</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="support">support</span> <span word="it">it</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="arguer">arguer</span> <span word="fails">fails</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="account">account</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="factors">factors</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="might">might</span> <span word="contribute">contribute</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="result">result</span> <span word="that">that</span>++++<span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="likely">likely</span> <span word="that">that</span>++++++<span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="likely">likely</span> <span word="that">that</span> ++++. <span word="Any">Any</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="thee">thee</span> <span word="scenarios">scenarios</span>， <span word="if">if</span> <span word="true">true</span>， <span word="would">would</span> <span word="show">show</span> <span word="that">that</span>++++. <span word="Therefore">Therefore</span>， <span word="this">this</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="question">question</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="accepted">accepted</span> <span word="without">without</span> <span word="ruling">ruling</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="possibility">possibility</span> <span word="that">that</span>++++++</p><p> </p><p> <span word="Secondly">Secondly</span>， <span word="the">the</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="commits">commits</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="logical">logical</span> <span word="fallacy">fallacy</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="after">after</span> <span word="this">this</span>， <span word="therefore">therefore</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="this">this</span>。 <span word="In">In</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="case">case</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="mere">mere</span> <span word="fact">fact</span> <span word="that">that</span> +++++ <span word="be">be</span> <span word="cited">cited</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="evidence">evidence</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="support">support</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="assumption">assumption</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="causal">causal</span>-<span word="effect">effect</span> <span word="relationship">relationship</span> <span word="between">between</span> <span word="A">A</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="B">B</span>. <span word="Moreover">Moreover</span>， <span word="that">that</span> <span word="just">just</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="B">B</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="statistically">statistically</span> <span word="correlated">correlated</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="A">A</span> <span word="doesnt">doesnt</span> <span word="necessarily">necessarily</span> <span word="mean">mean</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="A">A</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="cause">cause</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="B">B</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="fact">fact</span>， <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="obviously">obviously</span> <span word="neglected">neglected</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="possibility">possibility</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="alternative">alternative</span> <span word="factors">factors</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="as">as</span>++++， <span word="or">or</span> +++ <span word="that">that</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="contribute">contribute</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="certain">certain</span> <span word="extent">extent</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="B">B</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="coincidence">coincidence</span> <span word="that">that</span>+++++. <span word="Unless">Unless</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="rule">rule</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="factors">factors</span> <span word="relevant">relevant</span> <span word="to">to</span>+++++， <span word="this">this</span> <span word="assumption">assumption</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="question">question</span> <span word="cant">cant</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="accepted">accepted</span>.</p>
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