实例详解GMAT作文写作技法(二)
<p> 如何快速提升<span word="GMAT">GMAT</span>作文的写作技巧呢?下文将会对<span word="GMAT">GMAT</span>作文中<span word="Argument">Argument</span>部分的写作方法及提升要点进行深入的分析，正在积极备战<span word="GMAT">GMAT</span>作文的同学们不妨来参考一下。</p><p> <span word="GMAT">GMAT</span>的6分范文，明确处理了其中的4个错误点：</p><p> <span word="warning">warning</span>只是警告，如果飞行员没注意到，还会相撞:</p><p> <span word="First">First</span>, <span word="if">if</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="cause">cause</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="problem">problem</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="midair">midair</span> <span word="plane">plane</span> <span word="collisions">collisions</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="pilots">pilots</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="paying">paying</span> <span word="attention">attention</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="computer">computer</span> <span word="systems">systems</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="flight">flight</span> <span word="operation">operation</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="warning">warning</span> <span word="system">system</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="solve">solve</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="collision">collision</span> <span word="problem">problem</span>.</p><p> <span word="onboard">onboard</span>机载设备不具备强制性、权威性，飞行员可以选择是否执行</p><p> <span word="Second">Second</span>, <span word="If">If</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="pilot">pilot</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="flight">flight</span> <span word="specialist">specialist</span> <span word="does">does</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="conform">conform</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="warning">warning</span> <span word="system">system</span> <span word="suggests">suggests</span>, <span word="midair">midair</span> <span word="collision">collision</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="avoided">avoided</span>. <span word="Source">Source</span>:<span word="Veduchina">Veduchina</span></p><p> <span word="computerized">computerized</span>计算机可能会失灵</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="does">does</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="address">address</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="happen">happen</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="event">event</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="warning">warning</span> <span word="system">system</span> <span word="collapses">collapses</span>, <span word="fails">fails</span>, <span word="or">or</span> <span word="does">does</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="properly">properly</span>.</p><p> <span word="commercial">commercial</span> <span word="airlines">airlines</span>没有排除与军队飞机或私人飞机相撞的可能性</p><p> <span word="Finally">Finally</span>, <span word="if">if</span> <span word="planes">planes</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="commercial">commercial</span> <span word="airlines">airlines</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="involved">involved</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="collisions">collisions</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="problem">problem</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="collisions">collisions</span> <span word="cannot">cannot</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="solved">solved</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="warning">warning</span> <span word="system">system</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="installed">installed</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="non">non</span>-<span word="commercial">commercial</span> <span word="airlines">airlines</span>.</p><p> 通过对于6分范文的分析，可以体会到<span word="GMAT">GMAT</span>出题人对于短题目的考察，偏重于题目细节，希望考生能够细致的对题目进行分析、较全面的指出错误点。尽管这道题的错误类型很单一，只是因果错误，但是，如果不能够深入到细节的话，并找到过半的错误点，分数很难得到大幅提高。</p>
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