GMAT写作范文精选：Argument例文(33)
<p> <span word="GMAT">GMAT</span>写作范文精选：<span word="Argument">Argument</span>例文</p><p> 小编提醒：考生们可在日常生活中多读范文，多练笔，培养出好的语感和逻辑，这样才能在考试中写出优秀的作文。</p><p> 33. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="memorandum">memorandum</span>， <span word="the">the</span> <span word="vice">vice</span> <span word="president">president</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Road">Road</span> <span word="Food">Food</span> <span word="suggests">suggests</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="company">company</span> <span word="motivate">motivate</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="advertising">advertising</span> <span word="agency">agency</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="perform">perform</span> <span word="better">better</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="basing">basing</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="agencys">agencys</span> <span word="pay">pay</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Road">Road</span> <span word="Foods">Foods</span> <span word="profits">profits</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="support">support</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="suggestion">suggestion</span>， <span word="the">the</span> <span word="vice">vice</span> <span word="president">president</span> <span word="points">points</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="although">although</span> <span word="Road">Road</span> <span word="Food">Food</span> <span word="initially">initially</span> <span word="thought">thought</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="ad">ad</span> <span word="agency">agency</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="company">company</span> <span word="recommendations">recommendations</span>， <span word="competitor">competitor</span>-<span word="Street">Street</span> <span word="Eats">Eats</span> <span word="earned">earned</span> <span word="higher">higher</span> <span word="profits">profits</span> <span word="last">last</span> <span word="year">year</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="vice">vice</span> <span word="president">president</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="notes">notes</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="Street">Street</span> <span word="Eats">Eats</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="fewer">fewer</span> <span word="restaurants">restaurants</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="Road">Road</span> <span word="Food">Food</span>， <span word="and">and</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="Road">Road</span> <span word="Food">Food</span> <span word="spent">spent</span> <span word="nearly">nearly</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="money">money</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="advertising">advertising</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="Street">Street</span> <span word="Eats">Eats</span> <span word="did">did</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="unconvincing">unconvincing</span>， <span word="since">since</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="relies">relies</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="dubious">dubious</span> <span word="assumptions">assumptions</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="comparisons">comparisons</span>.</p><p> <span word="First">First</span>， <span word="the">the</span> <span word="vice">vice</span> <span word="president">president</span> <span word="assumes">assumes</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="ad">ad</span> <span word="campaign">campaign</span> <span word="caused">caused</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="low">low</span> <span word="profits">profits</span>. <span word="However">However</span>， <span word="the">the</span> <span word="vice">vice</span> <span word="president">president</span> <span word="ignores">ignores</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="factors">factors</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="contribute">contribute</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="profitability">profitability</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="particular">particular</span>， <span word="the">the</span> <span word="fact">fact</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="Road">Road</span> <span word="Food">Food</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="spending">spending</span> <span word="less">less</span> <span word="advertising">advertising</span> <span word="money">money</span> <span word="per">per</span> <span word="restaurant">restaurant</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="Street">Street</span> <span word="Eats">Eats</span> <span word="suggests">suggests</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="unwillingness">unwillingness</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="spend">spend</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="main">main</span> <span word="reason">reason</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="disappointing">disappointing</span> <span word="profits">profits</span>. <span word="Second">Second</span>， <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="implies">implies</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="ad">ad</span> <span word="agency">agency</span> <span word="failed">failed</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="implement">implement</span> <span word="Road">Road</span> <span word="Foods">Foods</span> <span word="guidelines">guidelines</span>， <span word="and">and</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="failure">failure</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="reason">reason</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="disappointing">disappointing</span> <span word="profits">profits</span>. <span word="However">However</span>， <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="equally">equally</span> <span word="possible">possible</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="ad">ad</span> <span word="agency">agency</span> <span word="faithfully">faithfully</span> <span word="followed">followed</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="suggestions">suggestions</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="Road">Road</span> <span word="Food">Food</span>， <span word="and">and</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="those">those</span> <span word="suggestions">suggestions</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="cause">cause</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="disappointing">disappointing</span> <span word="profits">profits</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="respect">respect</span>， <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="unfairly">unfairly</span> <span word="shifts">shifts</span> <span word="blame">blame</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="Road">Road</span> <span word="Food">Food</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="ad">ad</span> <span word="agency">agency</span>. <span word="Third">Third</span>， <span word="the">the</span> <span word="authors">authors</span> <span word="comparison">comparison</span> <span word="between">between</span> <span word="Road">Road</span> <span word="Food">Food</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="Street">Street</span> <span word="Eats">Eats</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="less">less</span> <span word="relevant">relevant</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="comparison">comparison</span> <span word="between">between</span> <span word="Road">Road</span> <span word="Foods">Foods</span> <span word="own">own</span> <span word="profits">profits</span> <span word="prior">prior</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="latest">latest</span> <span word="ad">ad</span> <span word="campaign">campaign</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="profits">profits</span> <span word="during">during</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="campaign">campaign</span>. <span word="Comparing">Comparing</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="own">own</span> <span word="profits">profits</span> <span word="during">during</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="periods">periods</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="accurately">accurately</span> <span word="reflect">reflect</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="ad">ad</span> <span word="agencys">agencys</span> <span word="effectiveness">effectiveness</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="comparing">comparing</span> <span word="profits">profits</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="different">different</span> <span word="companies">companies</span>. <span word="Finally">Finally</span>， <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="assumes">assumes</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="ad">ad</span> <span word="agency">agency</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="motivated">motivated</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="fee">fee</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="based">based</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="Road">Road</span> <span word="Food">Food</span> <span word="profits">profits</span>. <span word="However">However</span>， <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="does">does</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="support">support</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="claim">claim</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="fact">fact</span>， <span word="given">given</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="Road">Road</span> <span word="Foods">Foods</span> <span word="profits">profits</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="lower">lower</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="expected">expected</span>， <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="just">just</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="likely">likely</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="ad">ad</span> <span word="agency">agency</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="less">less</span> <span word="motivated">motivated</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="suggested">suggested</span> <span word="fee">fee</span> <span word="structure">structure</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="fee">fee</span> <span word="structure">structure</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="conclusion">conclusion</span>， <span word="the">the</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="unconvincing">unconvincing</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="stands">stands</span>. <span word="To">To</span> <span word="strengthen">strengthen</span> <span word="it">it</span>， <span word="the">the</span> <span word="vice">vice</span> <span word="president">president</span> <span word="must">must</span> <span word="provide">provide</span> <span word="evidence">evidence</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="ad">ad</span> <span word="campaign">campaign</span> <span word="caused">caused</span> <span word="last">last</span> <span word="years">years</span> <span word="disappointing">disappointing</span> <span word="profits">profits</span>， <span word="and">and</span> <span word="must">must</span> <span word="examine">examine</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="rule">rule</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="factors">factors</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="contributed">contributed</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="disappointing">disappointing</span> <span word="profits">profits</span>.</p>
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