新GMAT考生Argument写作实例点评
<p> <span word="Argument">Argument</span>的题目是：</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="recommendation">recommendation</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="made">made</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="president">president</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="administrative">administrative</span> <span word="staff">staff</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Grove">Grove</span> <span word="College">College</span>， <span word="a">a</span> <span word="private">private</span> <span word="institute">institute</span>， <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="colleges">colleges</span> <span word="governing">governing</span> <span word="committee">committee</span>.<span word="We">We</span> <span word="recommend">recommend</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="Grove">Grove</span> <span word="College">College</span> <span word="preserve">preserve</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="century">century</span>-<span word="old">old</span> <span word="tradition">tradition</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="all">all</span>-<span word="female">female</span> <span word="education">education</span> <span word="rather">rather</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="admit">admit</span> <span word="men">men</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="programs">programs</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="true">true</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="majority">majority</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="faculty">faculty</span> <span word="members">members</span> <span word="voted">voted</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="favor">favor</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="coeducation">coeducation</span>， <span word="arguing">arguing</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="encourage">encourage</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="apply">apply</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="Grove">Grove</span>. <span word="But">But</span> 80 <span word="percent">percent</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="responding">responding</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="survey">survey</span> <span word="conducted">conducted</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="government">government</span> <span word="wanted">wanted</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="remain">remain</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="female">female</span>， <span word="and">and</span> <span word="over">over</span> <span word="half">half</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="alumni">alumni</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="answered">answered</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="separate">separate</span> <span word="survey">survey</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="opposed">opposed</span> <span word="coeducation">coeducation</span>. <span word="Keeping">Keeping</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="college">college</span> <span word="all">all</span>-<span word="female">female</span>， <span word="therefore">therefore</span>， <span word="will">will</span> <span word="improve">improve</span> <span word="morale">morale</span> <span word="among">among</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="convince">convince</span> <span word="alumni">alumni</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="keep">keep</span> <span word="supporting">supporting</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="college">college</span> <span word="financially">financially</span>.</p><p> <span word="Write">Write</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="response">response</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="discuss">discuss</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="specific">specific</span> <span word="evidence">evidence</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="needed">needed</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="evaluate">evaluate</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="explain">explain</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="evidence">evidence</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="weaken">weaken</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="strengthen">strengthen</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="argument">argument</span>.</p><p> 该考生<span word="Argument">Argument</span>的全文如下（考生原创回忆）：</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="recommendation">recommendation</span> <span word="made">made</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="president">president</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="administrative">administrative</span> <span word="staff">staff</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="private">private</span> <span word="institution">institution</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="colleges">colleges</span> <span word="governing">governing</span> <span word="committee">committee</span> <span word="claimed">claimed</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="century">century</span>-<span word="old">old</span> <span word="tradition">tradition</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="all">all</span>-<span word="female">female</span> <span word="education">education</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="supposed">supposed</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="maintain">maintain</span> <span word="instead">instead</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="admitting">admitting</span> <span word="men">men</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="program">program</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="claim">claim</span> <span word="seems">seems</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="well">well</span>-<span word="reasoned">reasoned</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="trustworthy">trustworthy</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="glance">glance</span>， <span word="however">however</span>，<span word="considering">considering</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="weak">weak</span> <span word="evidence">evidence</span> <span word="provided">provided</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="institution">institution</span>， <span word="the">the</span> <span word="conclusion">conclusion</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="unconvincing">unconvincing</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="unreliable">unreliable</span>.</p>
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