GMAT Argument写作范文89篇（10）
<p> <span word="On">On</span> <span word="average">average</span>, <span word="middle">middle</span>-<span word="aged">aged</span> <span word="consumers">consumers</span> <span word="devote">devote</span> 39% <span word="of">of</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="retail">retail</span> <span word="expenditure">expenditure</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="department">department</span> <span word="store">store</span> <span word="products">products</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="services">services</span>, <span word="while">while</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="younger">younger</span> <span word="consumers">consumers</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="average">average</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="only">only</span> 25%. <span word="Since">Since</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="number">number</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="middle">middle</span>-<span word="aged">aged</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="dramatically">dramatically</span> <span word="within">within</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="next">next</span> <span word="decade">decade</span>, <span word="department">department</span> <span word="stores">stores</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="expect">expect</span> <span word="retail">retail</span> <span word="sales">sales</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="significantly">significantly</span> <span word="during">during</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="period">period</span>. <span word="Furthermore">Furthermore</span>, <span word="to">to</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="advantage">advantage</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="trend">trend</span>, <span word="these">these</span> <span word="stores">stores</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="begin">begin</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="replace">replace</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="those">those</span> <span word="products">products</span> <span word="intended">intended</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="attract">attract</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="younger">younger</span> <span word="consumer">consumer</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="products">products</span> <span word="intended">intended</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="attract">attract</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="middle">middle</span>-<span word="aged">aged</span> <span word="consumer">consumer</span>.</p><p> <span word="Sample">Sample</span> <span word="Essay">Essay</span> 2:</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="retailers">retailers</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="replace">replace</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="products">products</span> <span word="intended">intended</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="attract">attract</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="younger">younger</span> <span word="consumers">consumers</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="products">products</span> <span word="intended">intended</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="attract">attract</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="middle">middle</span>-<span word="aged">aged</span> <span word="consumers">consumers</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="entirely">entirely</span> <span word="logically">logically</span> <span word="convincing">convincing</span>, <span word="since">since</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="ignores">ignores</span> <span word="certain">certain</span> <span word="crucial">crucial</span> <span word="assumptions">assumptions</span>.</p><p> <span word="First">First</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="omits">omits</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="assumption">assumption</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="business">business</span> <span word="volumes">volumes</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="both">both</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="middle">middle</span>-<span word="aged">aged</span> <span word="consumers">consumers</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="younger">younger</span> <span word="consumers">consumers</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="same">same</span>. <span word="If">If</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="business">business</span> <span word="volume">volume</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="middle">middle</span>-<span word="aged">aged</span> <span word="consumers">consumers</span> 39% <span word="is">is</span> <span word="smaller">smaller</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="younger">younger</span> <span word="consumers">consumers</span> 25%, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="retail">retail</span> <span word="sales">sales</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="during">during</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="next">next</span> <span word="decade">decade</span>.</p><p> <span word="Second">Second</span>, <span word="even">even</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="business">business</span> <span word="volumes">volumes</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="both">both</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="middle">middle</span>-<span word="aged">aged</span> <span word="consumers">consumers</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="younger">younger</span> <span word="consumers">consumers</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="same">same</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="last">last</span> <span word="decade">decade</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="middle">middle</span>-<span word="aged">aged</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="next">next</span> <span word="decade">decade</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="same">same</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="retail">retail</span> <span word="expenditure">expenditure</span>, <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="retail">retail</span> <span word="trade">trade</span> <span word="depends">depends</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="factors">factors</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="economic">economic</span> <span word="circumstances">circumstances</span>, <span word="peoples">peoples</span> <span word="consuming">consuming</span> <span word="desire">desire</span>.</p>
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