GMAT作文：Argument范文精选（41）
<p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="appeared">appeared</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="editorial">editorial</span> <span word="section">section</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="corporate">corporate</span> <span word="newsletter">newsletter</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="common">common</span> <span word="notion">notion</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="workers">workers</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="generally">generally</span> <span word="apathetic">apathetic</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="management">management</span> <span word="issues">issues</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="false">false</span>， <span word="or">or</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="least">least</span> <span word="outdated">outdated</span>： <span word="a">a</span> <span word="recently">recently</span> <span word="published">published</span> <span word="survey">survey</span> <span word="indicates">indicates</span> <span word="that">that</span> 79 <span word="percent">percent</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="nearly">nearly</span> 1，200 <span word="workers">workers</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="responded">responded</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="survey">survey</span> <span word="questionnaires">questionnaires</span> <span word="expressed">expressed</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="high">high</span> <span word="level">level</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="interest">interest</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="topics">topics</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="corporate">corporate</span> <span word="restructuring">restructuring</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="redesign">redesign</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="benefits">benefits</span> <span word="programs">programs</span>. <span word="Discuss">Discuss</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="reasoned">reasoned</span>.。. <span word="etc">etc</span>.</p><p> <span word="Based">Based</span> <span word="upon">upon</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="survey">survey</span> <span word="among">among</span> <span word="workers">workers</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="indicates">indicates</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="high">high</span> <span word="level">level</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="interest">interest</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="topics">topics</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="corporate">corporate</span> <span word="restructuring">restructuring</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="redesign">redesign</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="benefits">benefits</span> <span word="programs">programs</span>， <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="concludes">concludes</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="workers">workers</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="apathetic">apathetic</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="management">management</span> <span word="issues">issues</span>. <span word="Specifically">Specifically</span>， <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="argued">argued</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="since">since</span> 79 <span word="percent">percent</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> 1200 <span word="workers">workers</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="responded">responded</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="survey">survey</span> <span word="expressed">expressed</span> <span word="interest">interest</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="topics">topics</span>， <span word="the">the</span> <span word="notion">notion</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="workers">workers</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="apathetic">apathetic</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="management">management</span> <span word="issues">issues</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="incorrect">incorrect</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="reasoning">reasoning</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="problematic">problematic</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="several">several</span> <span word="respects">respects</span>.</p><p> <span word="First">First</span>， <span word="the">the</span> <span word="statistics">statistics</span> <span word="cited">cited</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="editorial">editorial</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="misleading">misleading</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="total">total</span> <span word="number">number</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="workers">workers</span> <span word="employed">employed</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="corporation">corporation</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="specified">specified</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="example">example</span>， <span word="if">if</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="corporation">corporation</span> <span word="employs">employs</span> 2000 <span word="workers">workers</span>， <span word="the">the</span> <span word="fact">fact</span> <span word="that">that</span> 79 <span word="percent">percent</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="nearly">nearly</span> 1200 <span word="respondents">respondents</span> <span word="showed">showed</span> <span word="interest">interest</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="topics">topics</span> <span word="provides">provides</span> <span word="strong">strong</span> <span word="support">support</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="conclusion">conclusion</span>. <span word="On">On</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="hand">hand</span>， <span word="if">if</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="corporation">corporation</span> <span word="employs">employs</span> 200，000 <span word="workers">workers</span>， <span word="the">the</span> <span word="conclusion">conclusion</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="weaker">weaker</span>.</p><p> <span word="Another">Another</span> <span word="problem">problem</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="respondents">respondents</span> <span word="views">views</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="necessarily">necessarily</span> <span word="representative">representative</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="views">views</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="force">force</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="general">general</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="example">example</span>， <span word="because">because</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="survey">survey</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="apathy">apathy</span>， <span word="it">it</span> <span word="makes">makes</span> <span word="sense">sense</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="less">less</span> <span word="apathetic">apathetic</span> <span word="workers">workers</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="respond">respond</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="it">it</span>， <span word="thereby">thereby</span> <span word="distorting">distorting</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="overall">overall</span> <span word="picture">picture</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="apathy">apathy</span> <span word="among">among</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="force">force</span>. <span word="Without">Without</span> <span word="knowing">knowing</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="survey">survey</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="conducted">conducted</span>， <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="impossible">impossible</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="assess">assess</span> <span word="whether">whether</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="case">case</span>.</p>
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