GRE写作开头都有哪些问题
<p> 新<span word="GRE">GRE</span>作文的开头就是给阅卷官产生第一个直接好坏印象的地方，好的<span word="GRE">GRE</span>作文开头往往就能给<span word="GRE">GRE</span>考试高分打下了良好的基础，而一个差的<span word="GRE">GRE</span>作文开头甚至会毁了一篇好的文章内容。</p><p> <span word="GRE">GRE</span>作文失败开头之一：观点武断 态度强硬</p><p> 典型失败案例：<span word="Topic">Topic</span>1-<span word="The">The</span> <span word="importance">importance</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="confidence">confidence</span></p><p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="opinion">opinion</span>, <span word="confidence">confidence</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="important">important</span> <span word="thing">thing</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="person">person</span>. <span word="All">All</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="successful">successful</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="world">world</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="full">full</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="confidence">confidence</span>. <span word="While">While</span> <span word="those">those</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="dont">dont</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="confidence">confidence</span>, <span word="they">they</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="failed">failed</span>.</p><p> <span word="Topic">Topic</span> 2 - <span word="The">The</span> <span word="solution">solution</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="traffic">traffic</span> <span word="problem">problem</span></p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="solve">solve</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="traffic">traffic</span> <span word="problem">problem</span>, <span word="very">very</span> <span word="easy">easy</span>! <span word="For">For</span> <span word="those">those</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="dont">dont</span> <span word="obey">obey</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="traffic">traffic</span> <span word="rules">rules</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="put">put</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="prison">prison</span>. <span word="If">If</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="that">that</span>, <span word="Im">Im</span> <span word="sure">sure</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="traffic">traffic</span> <span word="problem">problem</span> <span word="any">any</span> <span word="more">more</span>.</p><p> <span word="GRE">GRE</span>作文失败开头之二：偏离主题无轨电车</p><p> 典型失败案例：<span word="Topic">Topic</span>-<span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="said">said</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="nowadays">nowadays</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="acquire">acquire</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="qualifications">qualifications</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="quality">quality</span> <span word="essential">essential</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="success">success</span> <span word="through">through</span> <span word="university">university</span> <span word="education">education</span>. <span word="To">To</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="extent">extent</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="agree">agree</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="disagree">disagree</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="statement">statement</span>?</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="success">success</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="must">must</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="lot">lot</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="important">important</span> <span word="qualities">qualities</span>. <span word="To">To</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="important">important</span> <span word="qualities">qualities</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="must">must</span> <span word="learn">learn</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="lot">lot</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="things">things</span>, <span word="for">for</span> <span word="example">example</span>, <span word="English">English</span>, <span word="music">music</span> <span word="tools">tools</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="etc">etc</span>. <span word="We">We</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="learn">learn</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="qualities">qualities</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="teachers">teachers</span>, <span word="our">our</span> <span word="friends">friends</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="books">books</span>. <span word="All">All</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="all">all</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="learn">learn</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="places">places</span>.</p>
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