GRE作文修改：if a means is justifiable
<p> 再次深刻感觉到，<span word="GRE">GRE</span>作文，对于大家的难点其实是逻辑，再给一篇我刚改过的文章，希望你们能有所体会</p><p> <span word="TOPIC">TOPIC</span>: <span word="ISSUE">ISSUE</span>212 - <span word="If">If</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="goal">goal</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="worthy">worthy</span>, <span word="then">then</span> <span word="any">any</span> <span word="means">means</span> <span word="taken">taken</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="attain">attain</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="justifiable">justifiable</span>.</p><p> <span word="WORDS">WORDS</span>: 378 <span word="TIME">TIME</span>: 00:45:00 <span word="DATE">DATE</span>: 2009-8-16 23:58:32</p><p> <span word="Whether">Whether</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="goal">goal</span> <span word="deserves">deserves</span> <span word="attaining">attaining</span> <span word="depends">depends</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="whether">whether</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="worthiness">worthiness</span> <span word="overweigh">overweigh</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="price">price</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="means">means</span> <span word="taken">taken</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="achieve">achieve</span> <span word="it">it</span>. <span word="Means">Means</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="cost">cost</span> <span word="too">too</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="illegal">illegal</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="surely">surely</span> <span word="unreasonable">unreasonable</span>. <span word="However">However</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="spiritual">spiritual</span> <span word="goals">goals</span>, <span word="whose">whose</span> <span word="value">value</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="hard">hard</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="tell">tell</span>, <span word="any">any</span> <span word="means">means</span>, <span word="if">if</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="legal">legal</span>, <span word="ethical">ethical</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="personal">personal</span> <span word="will">will</span>, <span word="is">is</span> <span word="justifiable">justifiable</span>.</p><p> <span word="Firstly">Firstly</span>, <span word="some">some</span> <span word="goals">goals</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="unrealistic">unrealistic</span> <span word="current">current</span> <span word="condition">condition</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="short">short</span>-<span word="term">term</span>. <span word="Methods">Methods</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="expect">expect</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="reach">reach</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="goal">goal</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="quick">quick</span> <span word="step">step</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="unfeasible">unfeasible</span> <span word="since">since</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="hardy">hardy</span> <span word="solve">solve</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="essential">essential</span> <span word="problem">problem</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="might">might</span> <span word="cause">cause</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="problems">problems</span>. <span word="Consider">Consider</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="goal">goal</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="minish">minish</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="poverty">poverty</span> <span word="gap">gap</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="beneficial">beneficial</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="stability">stability</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="society">society</span>. <span word="But">But</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="goal">goal</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="reach">reach</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="taxing">taxing</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="large">large</span> <span word="amount">amount</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="affluent">affluent</span> <span word="groups">groups</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="transfer">transfer</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="proles">proles</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="wealthies">wealthies</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="consider">consider</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="unfair">unfair</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="try">try</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="elude">elude</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="tax">tax</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="endeavor">endeavor</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="likely">likely</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="null">null</span>. <span word="Another">Another</span> <span word="unjustifiable">unjustifiable</span> <span word="mean">mean</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="lay">lay</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="lump">lump</span> <span word="sum">sum</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="money">money</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="each">each</span> <span word="person">person</span>, <span word="thus">thus</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="money">money</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="owns">owns</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="reach">reach</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="average">average</span> <span word="level">level</span>. <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="sudden">sudden</span> <span word="inflation">inflation</span> <span word="caused">caused</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="policy">policy</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="cause">cause</span> <span word="raise">raise</span> <span word="nominal">nominal</span> <span word="interest">interest</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="economic">economic</span> <span word="index">index</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="cause">cause</span> <span word="unpredictable">unpredictable</span> <span word="fluctuation">fluctuation</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="economy">economy</span>.</p>
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