GRE考试作文的遣词造句(二)：ETS的6分标准
<p> 我对于<span word="ETS">ETS</span>一篇没有写完的范文的一点粗浅的看法</p><p> 思想性方面有很多人也评论过了~我仅仅对于其中的词句有自己的一点点看法。<span word="The">The</span> <span word="media">media</span> <span word="tend">tend</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="create">create</span> <span word="rather">rather</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="reflect">reflect</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="values">values</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="society">society</span>.</p><p> 6――<span word="For">For</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="grandparents">grandparents</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="occurred">occurred</span>注意：人家用的事<span word="occur">occur</span>而不是<span word="take">take</span> <span word="place">place</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="happen">happen</span> <span word="through">through</span> <span word="films">films</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="books">books</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="baby">baby</span> <span word="boomers">boomers</span>婴儿潮~对于非美国人不熟悉其文化对于这个历史背景并不了解~但是~<span word="baby">baby</span> <span word="boomer">boomer</span>其实替换了<span word="our">our</span> <span word="parents">parents</span> 避免和<span word="grandparents">grandparents</span>类似 <span word="it">it</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="result">result</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="television">television</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="revolutionary">revolutionary</span>并不直接说<span word="music">music</span>而是加上了一个强烈的形容词~表示音乐对于人的影响是巨大的~为后问的观点作铺垫 <span word="music">music</span>. <span word="No">No</span> <span word="matter">matter</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="impact">impact</span>小词~出现并不是不好~但是人家后面就在很后面再 用了一次 <span word="took">took</span> <span word="place">place</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="clear">clear</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="since">since</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="advent">advent</span>很明显<span word="advent">advent</span>替换了<span word="beginning">beginning</span>/<span word="start">start</span>甚至连<span word="threshold">threshold</span>都没有用~而是一个名词~可见作者对于用词是非常讲究的, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="media">media</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="played">played</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="crucial">crucial</span>同样~一个小小的形容词 <span word="role">role</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="simply">simply</span> <span word="being">being</span> <span word="representative">representative</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="values">values</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="society">society</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="creating">creating</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="well">well</span>.作者把<span word="not">not</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="also">also</span>的句型改变成为<span word="not">not</span> <span word="simply">simply</span> <span word="but">but</span>很明显为了区别这个短语。这一段中,作者引题用了两个<span word="for">for</span>,<span word="for">for</span>的对称的句子并且对于媒体并没有说出来~<span word="no">no</span> <span word="matter">matter</span>一个很简单的让步~但是后面<span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> 用了非常精当的开始的名词形式的同义变换<span word="advent">advent</span>,在<span word="play">play</span> <span word="role">role</span>短语后面连接了<span word="not">not</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="also">also</span>的改变的形式~组装出精炼的句子表达出自己的意见。</p>
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