GRE考试作文的遣词造句(三)：ETS的6分标准
<p> 下面的是<span word="ETS">ETS</span>对它的评论</p><p> <span word="This">This</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="outstanding">outstanding</span> <span word="response">response</span>, <span word="even">even</span> <span word="though">though</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="quite">quite</span> <span word="finished">finished</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="writers">writers</span> <span word="views">views</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="issue">issue</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="cogent">cogent</span>, <span word="well">well</span> <span word="articulated">articulated</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="developed">developed</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="writer">writer</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="penalized">penalized</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="failing">failing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="provide">provide</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="conclusion">conclusion</span>. <span word="What">What</span> <span word="matters">matters</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="quality">quality</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="thinking">thinking</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="displayed">displayed</span>, <span word="not">not</span> <span word="whether">whether</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="essay">essay</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="totally">totally</span> <span word="finished">finished</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="certain">certain</span> <span word="number">number</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="words">words</span>.</p><p> 这一段对作者的文笔评论的好<span word="The">The</span> <span word="writers">writers</span> <span word="skill">skill</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="apparent">apparent</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="opening">opening</span> <span word="lines">lines</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="words">words</span>, <span word="For">For</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="grandparents">grandparents</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="occurred">occurred</span>, <span word="immediately">immediately</span> <span word="spark">spark</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="readers">readers</span> <span word="interest">interest</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="quick">quick</span> <span word="repetition">repetition</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="sentence">sentence</span> <span word="structure">structure</span> <span word="and">and</span>, <span word="once">once</span> <span word="again">again</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="intentionally">intentionally</span> <span word="vague">vague</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="effectively">effectively</span> <span word="draw">draw</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="reader">reader</span> <span word="in">in</span>. <span word="By">By</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="third">third</span> <span word="sentence">sentence</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="know">know</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="essay">essay</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="address">address</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="complexity">complexity</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="issue">issue</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="writer">writer</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="fully">fully</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="command">command</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="discussion">discussion</span>.</p><p> 对于历史的深刻了解~这个是我们很难做到的<span word="The">The</span> <span word="rest">rest</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="essay">essay</span> <span word="addresses">addresses</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="influence">influence</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="historical">historical</span> <span word="events">events</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="media">media</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="values">values</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="modern">modern</span> <span word="society">society</span>, <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="roaring">roaring</span> <span word="twenties">twenties</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="sixties">sixties</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="seventies">seventies</span>. <span word="Insightful">Insightful</span> <span word="analysis">analysis</span> <span word="accompanies">accompanies</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="historical">historical</span> <span word="references">references</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="example">example</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="writer">writer</span> <span word="persuasively">persuasively</span> <span word="argues">argues</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="prominent">prominent</span> <span word="figures">figures</span> <span word="advanced">advanced</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="social">social</span> <span word="agendas">agendas</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="capitalizing">capitalizing</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="power">power</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="media">media</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="change">change</span> <span word="public">public</span> <span word="opinion">opinion</span>.</p><p> 这里也是对于语法句法的评论<span word="Throughout">Throughout</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="essay">essay</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="writer">writer</span> <span word="uses">uses</span> <span word="language">language</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="syntax">syntax</span> <span word="effectively">effectively</span>. <span word="Word">Word</span> <span word="choice">choice</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="precise">precise</span> , <span word="sentences">sentences</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="structured">structured</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="communicate">communicate</span> <span word="ideas">ideas</span> <span word="clearly">clearly</span> , <span word="and">and</span> <span word="transitional">transitional</span> <span word="phrases">phrases</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="move">move</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="forward">forward</span></p>
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